Tuesday, January 13, 2026

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 [last train to San Fernando photo from Google]

 One day the train

Chugged along its rails

And rested

Never again to whistle

Clank or chug

Then the buses rolled

With people kids and goods


The way things change

After  long long semesters

© gillena cox 2026

##all of the railways were finally closed on December 28th, 1968 in Trinidad🇹🇹 



BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH 
Challenge: after reading and listening to
Folsom Prison Blues by Johnny Cash: to write an inspired poem 20 lines or less

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SONG CHOICE FOR TODAY

28 comments:

  1. your concluding couplet says it all

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  2. I think we should use railways and canals more, and forget about lorries and airfreight, Gillena. I miss the old trains.

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  3. I have recently started taking the train to the city, three hour trek due to issues driving. It's quite enjoyable. Nostalgic poem.

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  4. Transportation in our lifetime has seen many changes for sure! Trains still carry a lot of freight here.

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  5. I love you found the chug-chug of the train! (me too) Jae

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  6. Seems change is inevitable, Gillena. Nicely done.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

      🎇much love

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  7. Thanks for dropping by Linda

    🎇much love

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  8. I like the pace and tone of your poem, Gillena. There is a sense of definitive ending in the beat.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Melissa

      🎇much love

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  9. I prefer trains.... I liked them a lot better (and they are making a comeback)

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  10. We do not own a car. Have not owned one since we moved to Boston in 1997. Even here, when we spend winter's Jan/Feb/and early March in San Diego, California, we have senior bus passes and either take public transportation or walk. We use the train system a lot in Boston. Recently took the train to New York City rather than flying. I wish the states would put more money in to the rail system as they have in Europe and other countries.

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  11. I met someone in Sydney about a decade ago, who had to go to school by seaplane each day (back in the 40s or 50s). As a kid that would feel amazing (at least for a while!)

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  12. It's such a shame! Train is my favourite form of travel.

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  13. Thanks for dropping by Rosemary

    🎇much love

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  14. Wonderful poem, Gillena. I often wonder why train travel fell out of favor

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  15. Thanks for dropping by Pat

    🎇much love

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