Thursday, September 5, 2024

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Heat Tableau


Why is it today?

my entire  soul,

being a-ruffle,

as the rain leaves us,

to scorch and to burn.


victim of climate 

changing its wary

ways; hotter than hot,

rainier than wet

days, of yesteryears.


the noisy fan whirrs,

i scribe words to soothe

my new discomfort,

of climate days changed,

and yet still changing,

oh what a challenge.

© gillena cox 2024

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18 comments:

  1. I enjoyed your poem. You always have to fight to beat the heat I would imagine!

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  2. Yes ibdeed Dwight. Thanks gor dropping by

    much♡love

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  3. We also have too warm for the season (but here its blissfully masked as sweet summer)

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  4. You made me feel the heat in your tableau, Gillena, despite the cooler temperature here this morning. No wonder your soul is a-ruffle. You’ve certainly captured ‘climate changing its wary ways’. I also like the juxtaposition of the whirring of the noisy fan’ and ‘words to soothe…discomfort’.

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  5. What a fabulous phoenix! (Pity we couldn't be reborn after going through this kind of fire.) A powerful poem.

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  6. Thank you for your appreciation Rosemary

    much♡love

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  7. This horrific warming of the Earth feels terrifying much of the time, you chose a timely topic and composed a wonderful tableau to describe it!

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Helen

      much♡love

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  8. It was really hot than usual. And no doubt climate changes are impacting us all. Hope you have a good and not so hot weather for the weekend.

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  9. Thanks for dropping by Grace

    much♡love

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Frank

      much♡love

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  11. Thank you for your appreciation Sara

    much♡love

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  12. Indeed it is a challenge, our trees are struggling to figure out what season it is.

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