Tuesday, September 3, 2024

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 Laughter: a fold poem

Laugh at the night, at the day, at the moon,

For laughter needs no reason

Laugh for you know not soon

The time to be serious comes

All her funny shaping laugh at the moon,

She lingers she hides 

She can make a lover's heart swoon

Laughter clears the eyes to see

Tomorrow is merely a disc and a spoon

Running away into imagination

So don't be afraid to laugh even at the moon,

© gillena cox 2024

NOTE: Line one is from Your Laughter by Pablo Neruda

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16 comments:

  1. Of course we should laugh, even at the moon. Lovely poem.

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  2. Thanks for dropping by Grace

    much♡love

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  3. Yes! I like this lighter look at the moon.

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  4. Yes i think so too, Björn

    much♡love

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  5. I like the idea of laughing at the moon, nicely done, Gillena. :)

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  6. All the wonderful parts of laughter! Well done.

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  7. Thanks for dropping by Cris

    much♡love

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  8. This is gorgeously executed, Gillena. I love; "Tomorrow is merely a disc and a spoon/Running away into imagination." 🩷🩷

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  9. Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

    much♡love

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  10. Lovely, Gillena and I like the nursery rhyme references...

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  11. Thank you for your appreciation Frewin

    much♡love

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