Copy this code, pin my button to your blogWelcome to Monday WRites # 335
You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance for eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Hello February.
A DAMEL'S LACE
Salty waves nibble at toes
Of life the ebbs and the flows
Cautious footsteps climbing rocks
Adventures bask in frilly frocks
Hearts abide through clouds shape
Fish refuse to take puny bait
However dark of tunnel space
Be there shone flicker for a damsel's lace
© gillena cox
Lovely poem. I especially like the rhyme scheme.
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Oh, a seaside view, the nibbling and the frills. Lovely.
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Wonderful lines and tones, last line brilliant..
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I love that line about the fish, Gillena :)
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Ah yes, beautifully written Gillena - the ups and downs of life, with a hopeful light at the end of the tunnel.
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Wonderful lines!
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Lovely poem, Gillena! I like the comparison of life to nature/seashore.💙
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The salty waves nibbling at toes...aww, I can feel that. I love all the sweeter words that start with "f"....like "frilly frocks". :D
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I really love the mood in this... the rhymes and the scene of waves nibbling your toes.
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