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 Rumpus Quadrille

What a rumpus, boys fighting on

the floor, 

I looked but i'd never seen them before,

Where did they come from? two naughty boys,

Disturbing the peace, upsetting our joys;

They rolled then rumpus-thumped

Out the door,

I swear! i'd never seen them before.

© gillena cox 2025




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6 comments:

  1. Kim M. RussellAugust 25, 2025 at 3:57 PM

    Nice one, Gillena, with echoes of Dr Seuss.

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  2. Gillena CoxAugust 25, 2025 at 3:58 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Kim

    Much♡love

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  3. ms_liliAugust 25, 2025 at 5:57 PM

    You capture the surprise and the violence of when a fight spills from the street into a home.

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  4. Sunflower Tanka AnthologyAugust 25, 2025 at 6:15 PM

    Gillena, I enjoyed "rumpus-thumped." This is the perfect description!

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  5. Gillena CoxAugust 25, 2025 at 6:44 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Sunflower

    Much♡love

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