Thursday, August 25, 2022

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KISS THIS NIGHT

Since music sustains,

There’s no need for hunger,

No, let us feast for life regains

Help, of passion's well auger,

Come let us dance this night,

Let us fashion each star shine,

Us, just us two, under moon's sight;

Kiss goodbye those eyes that brine,

And nurture instead a giddy heart

Part thee waves sweetheart of mine

KISS THIS NIGHT © gillena cox 2022


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22 comments:

  1. Let us fashion each star shine, - love this line, Gillena - young love can make stars shine anywhere!

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  2. Thanks for your appreciation Sarah

    Much💖love

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  3. Such sweet romance, where everything else disappears.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

      Much💖love

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  5. Love, music, dancing under the moonlight....it made me forget all about the line and form. Beautiful.

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  6. Thanks for your appreciation Mish

    Much💖love

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  7. Ah, the giddy hearts! Lovely, Gillena. 💙

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Punam

      Much💖love

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  8. This is wonderfully romantic, very engaging Gillena. 🙂✌🏼❤️

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  9. 'Let us fashion each star shine' such a romantic line!

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  10. Nice one, Gillena! I love the imperative: ‘Let us fashion each star shine…under moon's sight’.

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  11. very well done the way you blended the given line into your poem - and with rhymes too

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  12. Thanks for your appreciation Laura

    Much💖love

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  13. Kiss goodbye those eyes that brine... oh yeah... that is so much needed sometimes

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  14. Happy you dropped by Björn

    Much💖love

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  15. ...fashion each star shine (love that)

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  16. Happy you dropped by Margaret

    Much💖love

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