Thursday, August 25, 2022

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KISS THIS NIGHT

Since music sustains,

There’s no need for hunger,

No, let us feast for life regains

Help, of passion's well auger,

Come let us dance this night,

Let us fashion each star shine,

Us, just us two, under moon's sight;

Kiss goodbye those eyes that brine,

And nurture instead a giddy heart

Part thee waves sweetheart of mine

KISS THIS NIGHT © gillena cox 2022


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22 comments:

  1. sarahAugust 25, 2022 at 4:57 PM

    Let us fashion each star shine, - love this line, Gillena - young love can make stars shine anywhere!

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  2. Gillena CoxAugust 25, 2022 at 5:29 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Sarah

    Much💖love

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  3. ms_liliAugust 25, 2022 at 5:37 PM

    Such sweet romance, where everything else disappears.

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  4. Dwight L. RothAugust 25, 2022 at 6:54 PM

    Beautifully written Gillena!

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    1. Gillena CoxAugust 25, 2022 at 8:20 PM

      Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

      Much💖love

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  5. MishAugust 25, 2022 at 7:14 PM

    Love, music, dancing under the moonlight....it made me forget all about the line and form. Beautiful.

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  6. Gillena CoxAugust 25, 2022 at 8:20 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Mish

    Much💖love

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  7. paeansunpluggedAugust 25, 2022 at 11:00 PM

    Ah, the giddy hearts! Lovely, Gillena. 💙

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    1. Gillena CoxAugust 26, 2022 at 8:00 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Punam

      Much💖love

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  8. robkistnerAugust 26, 2022 at 12:17 AM

    This is wonderfully romantic, very engaging Gillena. 🙂✌🏼❤️

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  9. Jane DoughertyAugust 26, 2022 at 4:51 AM

    'Let us fashion each star shine' such a romantic line!

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  10. Kim M. RussellAugust 26, 2022 at 5:01 AM

    Nice one, Gillena! I love the imperative: ‘Let us fashion each star shine…under moon's sight’.

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  11. Laura BloomsburyAugust 26, 2022 at 5:06 AM

    very well done the way you blended the given line into your poem - and with rhymes too

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  12. Gillena CoxAugust 26, 2022 at 8:01 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Laura

    Much💖love

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  13. brudbergAugust 28, 2022 at 10:21 AM

    Kiss goodbye those eyes that brine... oh yeah... that is so much needed sometimes

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  14. Gillena CoxAugust 28, 2022 at 6:12 PM

    Happy you dropped by Björn

    Much💖love

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  15. MargaretAugust 30, 2022 at 9:15 PM

    ...fashion each star shine (love that)

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  16. Gillena CoxAugust 30, 2022 at 11:39 PM

    Happy you dropped by Margaret

    Much💖love

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