Monday, May 5, 2025

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[image courtesy, dVerse Poetry Pub]

 Tangle - Quadrille

Untangle this,

If you should miss 

The opportunity,  to

See groups of two

Colours, their strands

Relating where you stand,

Then the better to see

You, my dear can be

Drinking soup from a bowl,

Red as your dear soul,

Aflamed with filial love.

© gillena cox 2025


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11 comments:

  1. DoraMay 5, 2025 at 3:41 PM

    I like your theory of tangled relativity, Gillena. 🙂💞

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    1. Gillena CoxMay 5, 2025 at 4:14 PM

      Thanks for your appreciation Dora

      Much♡love

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  2. Kim M. RussellMay 5, 2025 at 3:47 PM

    I like the direct address in your tangle quadrille, Gillena, which drew me in. It made me think of my sisters; there were three of us, now only two still ‘aflamed with filial love’.

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  3. brudbergMay 5, 2025 at 4:06 PM

    It is always a bit of a tangle.... but the filial love is what matters.

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  4. Gillena CoxMay 5, 2025 at 4:13 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Björn

    Much♡love

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  5. Nolcha FoxMay 5, 2025 at 5:40 PM

    Your quadrille is great to read out loud, Gillena!

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  6. Gillena CoxMay 5, 2025 at 6:09 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Nolcha

    Much♡love

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  7. Merril D. SmithMay 6, 2025 at 11:33 AM

    I like the tangle of colors, Gillena! 💙

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  8. Gillena CoxMay 6, 2025 at 1:50 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Merril

    Much♡love

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  9. pvcann.comMay 12, 2025 at 11:11 AM

    Yes everything is entwined, relational, tangled.

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