Thursday, May 5, 2022

923

EVEN

even

in May; blooming

ixoras a hedge of

pure delight, radiating in

sunshine.


sunshine

has found new joy,

her colours are varied,

but yellow will always draw hope

inward.


inward,

cherished portions -

such pleasantries banish

the dread, wanting to feast 

on fear.


on fear,

put the dumb cap!

of hope, gather feathers

that flight may meander outward,

showing.


showing

how nature glows, 

outside the bounds of man,

in her own peculiar way,

even.

© gillena cox 2022



BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

MTB: Crowning Crapsey
Challenged to write either a cinq-cinquain, OR a cinquain chain/crown cinquain.

Its Cinco de Mayo


REVISIT

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23 comments:

  1. Callsign SantaMay 5, 2022 at 6:19 PM

    A pretty picture painted, then one sees the message underlying...nicely done Gillena..

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  2. Gillena CoxMay 5, 2022 at 6:29 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Ain

    Much💛love

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  3. TruedessaMay 5, 2022 at 8:08 PM

    This was enjoyable to read and you rocked the form. Yellow the symbol of hope.

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  4. Gillena CoxMay 5, 2022 at 8:12 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Truedessa

    Much💛love

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  5. A Reading WriterMay 6, 2022 at 2:33 AM

    oh this is charming and delightful!

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  6. Gillena CoxMay 6, 2022 at 3:57 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation

    Much💛love

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  7. Laura BloomsburyMay 6, 2022 at 5:01 AM

    Gillena this was lovely - so well written in the flow and imagery

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    1. Gillena CoxMay 6, 2022 at 9:47 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Laura

      Much💛love

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  8. KerfeMay 6, 2022 at 6:29 AM

    I love the colors of hope here.

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  9. Gillena CoxMay 6, 2022 at 9:47 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Kerfe

    Much💛love

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  10. HelenMay 6, 2022 at 1:52 PM

    You transported readers to a Happy Place ... thank you for that bit of sunshine.

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  11. Gillena CoxMay 6, 2022 at 2:33 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Helen

    Much💛love

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  12. paeansunpluggedMay 6, 2022 at 11:17 PM

    Delightfully coloured in hope, Gillena! 💛

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    1. Gillena CoxMay 7, 2022 at 11:07 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Punam

      Much💛love

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  13. Merril D. SmithMay 7, 2022 at 5:30 AM

    Nature does go on whatever we think. I love yellow flowers and the hope here, Gillena! 💛

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  14. Sunra RainzMay 7, 2022 at 6:51 PM

    A lovely cinquain, Gillena. I especially like the final stanza :-)

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  15. Gillena CoxMay 8, 2022 at 6:19 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Sunra

    Much💛love

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  16. brudbergMay 8, 2022 at 10:57 AM

    I especially caught the way we need that folly of hope... how could we not believe it will be better?

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  17. Gillena CoxMay 8, 2022 at 5:56 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Björn

    Much💛love

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  18. RostroseMay 9, 2022 at 9:35 AM

    Dear Gillena,
    this is a very artistic poem!
    Have a happy new week of May!
    Traude
    https://rostrose.blogspot.com/2022/05/monatsruckblick-auf-den-april-teil-1.html

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  19. Gillena CoxMay 9, 2022 at 10:49 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Traude

    Much💛love

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  20. purplepeninportland.comMay 12, 2022 at 8:22 PM

    "Yellow will always draw hope." Beautiful!

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  21. Gillena CoxMay 15, 2022 at 10:35 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sara

    Much💛love

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