Thursday, September 19, 2024

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 Morning Speaks Softly

When overhead sky is blank of cloud,

And morning birds dot its reserves,

Tree branches are sure to observe,

There is no need of noises loud.


And life to witness sunrise is proud;

More breaths are added now to this curve,

Paint all faces to worship and to serve,

When overhead sky is blank of cloud.


Creation wrestlles to discipline its crowd,

Not because they so deserve,

Rather that they may conserve,

There is no need of noises loud.


When overhead sky is blank of cloud,

Another dash of light and dark to swerve

There is no need of noises loud.

© gillena cox 2024


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16 comments:

  1. I love this line: Paint all faces to worship and to serve. Such a beautiful day it is when it is just the morning birds and there is not a lot of noise. Have a wonderful day!

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  2. Gillena I enjoyed your rhyming words, they worked well together.

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  3. Morning does speak softly, Gillena, and I love the way it murmurs through your villenot. The image of morning birds dotting a bank of cloud is gorgeous.

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  4. Thanks for your appreciation Kim

    much♡love

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  5. A wonderfully written villonnette. There is beauty in a sky blank of clouds.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Truedessa

      much♡love

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  6. I love this. Usually I enjoy birdsong in the early morning ... the birds you describe might be a different story. No need of noises loud ~~~ thank you so much for leaving me a comment.

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  7. Happy you dropped by Helen

    much♡love

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  8. Wow, this is really nice. I read it aloud and it has a beautiful, quiet tone. I feel this work as an ecological poem about protecting our environment.

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  9. A lovely villonnet, Gillena, celebrating a cloudless day!

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  10. Thanks for your appreciation Lynn

    much♡love

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