Swing low
Oh morning shadow
Still on early bend of dawn.
In nearby forest maybe little fawn
Might rise from bended
Sleep now ended
Some trees are wide awake
For daybreak's sake
Now birds will twitter
And a child in her knicker
Will yawn
© gillena cox 2024
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Lovely and idyllic, I think I see a nod to the poem by Moulton. Peace is upon daybreak...
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This is wonderfully enchanting Gillena — loved it my friend… 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
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Gillena, this was so beautiful and sweet. I could hear you reading it to a child 🥰 Lovely!
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A gentle lullaby or nursery rhyme, I think, Gillena. I love the idea of the morning shadow ‘still on early bend of dawn’.
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A soft lullaby for the morn to wake to..lovely
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oh, I love that idea of "bended sleep", Gillena! Well written!
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Thanks for your appreciation David
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Peaceful and enchanting, Gillena!
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Gillena, I love "on the bend of dawn." 🌅
ReplyDeleteand now i am yawning! thanks, Gillena :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a charming poem!
ReplyDeleteBended sleep, that has captured my thoughts.
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