Monday, August 5, 2024

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Door Ajar,

Door ajar

A peek allowed into her heart,

She loves wholeheartedly 

Still expecting love in return

She allows only a peek into

A heart that can easily be wounded 


A door that can open to

A jar full of fireflies

Given with a smile

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16 comments:

  1. Nicely done, Gillena, especially the door to her heart being ajar, and the ‘jar full of fireflies given with a smile’.

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  2. Oh, what a stunning visual, Gillena. A whole gorgeously lit world just waiting, if someone treats her heart right. I love this.

    De

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  3. Thanks for your appreciation De

    much🤍love

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  4. Gillena wonderful title and sentiment found within your poem.

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  5. I love that ending and smile. Cheers to that!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Grace

      much🤍love

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  6. LOVE that door ajar to her heart! :) Let love in!!!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Lillian

      much🤍love

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Punam

      much🤍love

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  8. Lovely thoughts here, Gillena! I hope someone finds that door ajar and opens it wider. 💙

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  9. Thanks for dropping by Merril

    much♡love

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