Tuesday, October 25, 2022

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[Japanese Art Figurative Painting Mario B. Gil Hairdresser Edo period from google]

HAIR PRETTY  

Wanting to get a good shampoo

Make her hair real pretty

So bid

She did

Make her hair real pretty


Seated there wrote she a ditty

To calm her nerves moreso

So glad

She had

To calm her nerves moreso


The trip back to her bunglow

In traffic jam with fret

Stopping

Starting

In traffic jam with fret


Without bandana her regret

Wild to wanton it grew

Chutney

Cut me

Wild to wanton it grew

HAIR PRETTY  © gillena cox 2022


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Poetics: The Indian connection

Challenged to use 4 from a list of words given. Exploring the Indian origin words in English Language.

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11 comments:

  1. I guess it's good she had a bandana! 🙂

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  2. 😊thanks for dropping by Merril

    Much❤love

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  3. A great job, Gillena. Nice revisit to the earlier form we had to write.

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  4. Thanks for your appreciation Punam

    Much❤love

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  5. A bandana is great if you are travelling in an open car. Just never use a scarf or you might end up like Isadora Duncan

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    1. 😊Thanks for your appreciation Björn

      Much❤love

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  6. Oh dear! That was a bad hair day I bet! Fun poem, Gillena.

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  7. Thanks for your appreciation Dora

    Much❤love

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  8. I thought this was a really cute poem...great take on the words!

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  9. Thanks for your appreciation Stacy

    Much❤love

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