Today's mosaic a photo and water colour painting. Sky Over The Falls
You've heard about the Monday Blues well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance for eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites # 321: A Happy Monday to all. Be Safe.
AND
Challenge - to write a haibun
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HAIBUN - FEAR
My heart thumps the wildest, when the earth shakes
the slightest tremor, the loudest quake. Seconds of life slip away. To where i retreat, my mind leaves
no trace. Like dying again and again, without the preps for the surgeon's knife.
The knives, bombs, guns, that anger and hatred dish out to the starving appetite of war,
via mass media, be it fact be it fictions. Those stories i can live without. Such are the violent events that bring terror to my heart.
There is fear too in loneliness, but there, challenges for joy in solitude reward the willing learner.
sometimes the dawn
lingers too long in absence
of bird whistles
© gillena cox 2021
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25 October 2016
wallsclosing in
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25 October 2016
wallsclosing in
taste and see
The watercolor in your mosaic is very pretty! Happy Monday!
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by Diane
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Intricate and so nicely written. I agree...that appetite for war...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Hamish
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Your haiku is incredible. A taste for violence is hard to quell. It is in our nature I suspect.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Glen
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Your haiku is the perfect ending.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Ken
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Very well written Gillena. I certainly share your fears my friend. 🙂
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Rob
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Eloquent prose, complemented by a poignant haiku! Brava, Gillena!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Frank
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I've never felt an earthquake and hope I never do. May all warmongers perish where they cower. You know it will never be on the front lines...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Lili
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The haiku was the perfect wrap to the discomfort/fear stirred up in the media, etc.! Well done.
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Thanks for your appreciation Dora
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Love the haibun as it really captures loneliness.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation K
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Your words are touching and too accurate.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Carol
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I love your mosaic and your poem is masterful.
ReplyDeleteToo much violence going it seems, even in our fiction and entertainment.
Thanks for your appreciation Yogi
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The Oregon Coast experienced an earthquake a few days ago ... far enough not to impact us, close enough to instill fear for Coastal friends. Cheers, Ms. Gillena, I enjoyed your haibun.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Helen
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Gillena - your talent with words and a clever turn of phrase never cease to amaze me! Violence rarely achieves its alleged aims; it only begets more violence. Thanks for linking to Mosaic Monday!
ReplyDeleteThe haiku really wrapped it up... and also left me with the sense that daylight will come.
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Particularly loved this line. Wonderful work!
Thanks for your appreciation Sara
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