Tuesday, September 27, 2022

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[Out of the Darkness: Fire Painting by Esther Griffith from google]

So the evil Which enters the office and hands her an 

apple. 

(We all know the story about which  half is edible and which is not). 

She, being 

(Trini to the bone liked mangoes and pomeracs).

So, she refuses the apple.

A few days later, she, the evil Which, does not show up for work.

As the rumour goes 

(It good fuh she! why she had to go and thief de office petty cash)

The evil Which is gone!!!

© gillena cox 2022

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22 comments:

  1. TriciaSeptember 27, 2022 at 8:38 PM

    Mangoes are so much better than apples! Happy Tuesday!! 💗

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  2. Gillena CoxSeptember 28, 2022 at 12:47 AM

    Thank for dropping by Tricia

    Much💛love

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  3. sarahSeptember 28, 2022 at 2:38 AM

    This made me smile! An island take.

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  4. Kim M. RussellSeptember 28, 2022 at 3:46 AM

    I enjoyed the wordplay, Gillena, the island story - and the mangoes.

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  5. paeansunpluggedSeptember 28, 2022 at 5:44 AM

    I like this, Gillena! Good one. 💙

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  6. Gillena CoxSeptember 28, 2022 at 8:19 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Punam

    Much💛love

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  7. DoraSeptember 28, 2022 at 1:40 PM

    Lol. I could hear the language of Trinidad loud and clear in the asides which work so marvelously giving flavour to an already flavourful and fun tale! I do wish you would do more of this, Gillena. I can't get enough of Trinidadian vernacular. :) Great use of pun, btw.
    ~ Dora

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  8. robkistnerSeptember 28, 2022 at 3:03 PM

    Loved the music and essence of Trinidad in the piece Gillena. Just wonderful read — thank you my friend! 🙂✌🏼❤️

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  9. BillSeptember 28, 2022 at 5:56 PM

    An interesting poetic story. Well done.

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  10. ms_liliSeptember 29, 2022 at 12:34 AM

    Ding Dong She's Gone. YAY!

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  11. Gillena CoxSeptember 29, 2022 at 1:36 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Lili

    Much💛love

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  12. EricaStaSeptember 29, 2022 at 12:42 PM

    Dear Gillena, September goes and it`s time to comment here... thank you for your nice words an my last post, I was pleased.

    Your poem is remarkable like the painting too.

    Wish you a very good week.
    Kind regards, Heidrun

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  13. Gillena CoxSeptember 29, 2022 at 5:15 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Heidrun

    Much💛love

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  14. SreejaSeptember 30, 2022 at 12:10 AM

    Ah! It's a happening poem by all means.

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  15. Gillena CoxSeptember 30, 2022 at 6:39 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Sreeja

    Much💛love

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  16. brudbergOctober 2, 2022 at 10:54 AM

    If only the evil just could go away as easy as that.

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  17. purplepeninportland.comOctober 2, 2022 at 8:34 PM

    Love the way your wrote this, Gillena! I would take a mango over an apple any day.

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