Tuesday, March 8, 2022

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 PEACE A CANDY SO SWEET

Dedication whispers to  heart

Steady, punctual, consistent.

Then three voices echo

Lets do this, i think i can, i know i must.

Carve a valentine, shaped for hope of peace and glory

Taste sunlight on  tongue of tomorrow how sweet this treat of peace

© gillena cox 2022


BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
dVerse – Poetics – Carroll Crush Saga 
challenge: select three titles (from a list of Lewis Carroll’s poems) and to blend them together to form a subject for a new poem
i used
A Valentine. The Three Voices. Dedication.





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22 comments:

  1. brudbergMarch 8, 2022 at 4:56 PM

    I love that taste... even if I cannot have it until tomorrow.

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  2. forestbatherMarch 8, 2022 at 5:03 PM

    Gillena I could not find where to comment on your pirate poem yesterday, but I loved it......how sweet indeed a treat of peace, yes...

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  3. Jane DoughertyMarch 8, 2022 at 5:09 PM

    I hope.

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  4. Gillena CoxMarch 8, 2022 at 5:10 PM

    Happy you dropped by Ain. Maybe you were in a different browser yesterday

    Much💜love

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  5. Sanaa RizviMarch 8, 2022 at 5:13 PM

    This is absolutely stunning, Gillena! I love the idea of tasting "sunlight on tongue of tomorrow." Thank you so much for writing to the prompt 💝💝

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  6. Gillena CoxMarch 8, 2022 at 6:05 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much💜love

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  7. LucyMarch 8, 2022 at 8:32 PM

    Love this!

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 8, 2022 at 11:06 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Lucy

      Much💜love

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  8. TriciaMarch 8, 2022 at 9:19 PM

    Pease is the sweetest treat, love this!

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 8, 2022 at 11:06 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Tricia

      Much💜love

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  9. rogblog666March 9, 2022 at 3:00 AM

    i waited till tomorrow so i could taste the sunshine of your poem. lovely .

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  10. Gillena CoxMarch 9, 2022 at 4:38 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Rog

    Much💜love

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  11. ms_liliMarch 10, 2022 at 1:07 AM

    A treat of peace sounds so right for right now. Please let it be.

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 10, 2022 at 11:34 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Lili

      Much💜love

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  12. kaykualaMarch 10, 2022 at 8:55 AM

    Love the closing Gillena! How we wish peace should not be trampled on all the time!

    Hank

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 10, 2022 at 11:34 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Hank

      Much💜love

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  13. David BogomolnyMarch 10, 2022 at 9:38 AM

    very lovely, Gillena!

    -David [ben Alexander]
    http://skepticskaddish.com/

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  14. Gillena CoxMarch 10, 2022 at 11:34 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation David

    Much💜love

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  15. purplepeninportland.comMarch 10, 2022 at 9:45 PM

    Oh, that last line was stunning, Gillena!

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  16. Gillena CoxMarch 11, 2022 at 12:59 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sara

    Much💜love

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