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YE OLE CINEMA REELS
Pit; they shouted and swore,
Too much, times some more.
House; heads leaned on shoulders,
Every now and then, whispers.
Balcony; turned up noses,
At House and Pit, holy roses!
Yuck! retreating darkness from;
Chewing gum,
Stretching from your soul,
Oops! i mean, sole.
YE OLE CINEMA REELS © gillena cox 2018
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Quadrille #66 – Yuck it Up
REVISIT
9 OCTOBER 2017
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...dark hall
I like how you describe "ye ole cinema" scene! Gum on seats or shoes...double yuck!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Lynn
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I think there is only one thing worse than gum and that is snuff...
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Björn
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Too much times some more!!! What a great line that is! You create a mood with this poem that is palpable. Well done :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Jilly
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Nice line: "Too much, times some more"
ReplyDeleteHappy ypu dropped by Frank
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Ah..yuck... can't think about it...
ReplyDeleteHappy ypu dropped by sreeja
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