Tuesday, October 9, 2018

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YE OLE CINEMA REELS
Pit; they shouted and swore,
Too much, times some more.

House; heads leaned on shoulders,
Every now and then, whispers.

Balcony; turned up noses,
At House and Pit, holy roses!

Yuck! retreating darkness from;
Chewing gum,

Stretching from your soul,
Oops! i mean, sole.
YE OLE CINEMA REELS © gillena cox 2018


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Quadrille #66 – Yuck it Up


REVISIT
9 OCTOBER 2017
not what...
...dark hall

10 comments:

  1. I like how you describe "ye ole cinema" scene! Gum on seats or shoes...double yuck!

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  2. Thanks for dropping by Lynn

    Much­čĆúlove

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  3. I think there is only one thing worse than gum and that is snuff...

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  4. Thanks for dropping by Bj├Ârn

    Much­čĆúlove

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  5. Too much times some more!!! What a great line that is! You create a mood with this poem that is palpable. Well done :)

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Jilly

      Much­čĆúlove

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  6. Nice line: "Too much, times some more"

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  7. Ah..yuck... can't think about it...

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  8. Happy ypu dropped by sreeja

    Much­čĆúlove

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