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"Hope smiles from the threshold of the year to come, whispering, 'It will be happier." Alfred Lord Tennyson
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I heard the wind this morning
A loud whoooooshing
The kind that causes breath to pause
From whence soul humbly withdraws
To divinity
Then it petered and dissolved there
In the calm of unseen atmosphere
Today is yesterday's tomorrow
It's like that the unseen day - Tomorrow
I broke into a hum
Those comforting songs you sing, enfold
When hope whispers at the threshold
Of a moment
[gillena cox]
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Oh my, this is so beautiful. "Today is yesterday's tomorrow It's like that the unseen day." i love your definition of today. Thanks so much for taking part in the challenge.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely, Gillena, one of your best.......I especially love your closing lines!
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Thank you Sherry
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How lovely, Gillena. Words to inspire!
ReplyDeleteTo be in the the future of yesterday can both be an enchanting thought or a reason for angst.. but with awareness we do the best.. don't we?
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year ☆´,•*´¨★ Ձ๏15 Kerry
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Thank you for your appreciation Bjorn
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Thank you Loredana
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I love that loud whoosing & the unseen day, tomorrow ~ Enjoyed your reflections ~
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Thank you Grace
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Oh those happy moments that set us humming! Nicely shared, Gillena.
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"when hope whispers at the threshold of a moment." How I love that!
ReplyDeleteYes, today is yesterday's tomorrow. I really like that particular thought. I hope 'hope' will be in abundance in the new year. Happy New Year, Gillena.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Sherry
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Thank you Mary
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Love the Tennyson quote and your incorporation of onomatopoeia to help the reader feel and hear the wind.
ReplyDeleteFinally we see the beauty of your soul. Sweet!
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Hope is such a life sustaining desire; we are lost without it.
ReplyDeleteThis is like being free from all the worries of life.
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Lovely poem Gillena. Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Gillena...beautiful lines...
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem. I found it inspirational and loved its dreamy feel. Very good writing! Have a great New Year.
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Happy you stopped by RK
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Surely Robin, thanks for stopping by, Happy New Year
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Happy you dropped by Totomai, Happy New Year
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Thank you Arathi, Happy New Year
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Thank you for your appreciation Myrna
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Nice of you to drop in Daniela
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I have now published this poem at PoemHunter.com; under the title: 'I HEARD THE WIND' - January 2018.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all kind comments and encouragement
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