Tuesday, June 3, 2025

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[painting courtesy dVerse Poetry ]
Picasso On The Beach
Pablo and Olga k- i -s -s- i -n -g
On the sandy beach
They are not even seeing
The child within reach

Sun up and sun hot
Driftwood and care
These adults augnt not
To act without fear

When then the boy asks
If they were playing tag
They chose somehow to mask
The kiss with a zig and a zag

© gillena cox 2025

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22 comments:

  1. brudbergJune 3, 2025 at 3:50 PM

    Ha... never saw the child... but that could be embarising

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    1. Gillena CoxJune 3, 2025 at 4:16 PM

      🙂 thanks for dropping by Björn

      Much♡love

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  2. Nolcha FoxJune 3, 2025 at 4:14 PM

    Very clever, Gillena! 💕❤️

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  3. Gillena CoxJune 3, 2025 at 4:17 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation, Nolcha

    Much♡love

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  4. Melissa LemayJune 3, 2025 at 4:17 PM

    Lots of zigging and zagging going on over there.🤭

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  5. Gillena CoxJune 3, 2025 at 5:40 PM

    🙂 thanks for dropping by Melidsa

    Much♡love

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  6. Kim M. RussellJune 4, 2025 at 2:18 AM

    A fun poem, Gillena.

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  7. Gillena CoxJune 4, 2025 at 6:10 AM

    🙂 thanks for dropping by Kim

    Much♡love

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  8. Aaron GuileJune 4, 2025 at 10:59 AM

    This was a lot of fun. I’d like the opening with the childhood rhyme. That was really clever.

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  9. Gillena CoxJune 4, 2025 at 12:52 PM

    🙂 thanks for dropping by Aaron

    Much♡love

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  10. HelenJune 4, 2025 at 1:48 PM

    OK you started me smiling and finishing up with a true giggle! Cheers and thanks.

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  11. Gillena CoxJune 4, 2025 at 2:11 PM

    🙂 thanks for your appreciation Helen

    Much♡love

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    1. Dwight L. RothJune 4, 2025 at 8:16 PM

      This one made me smile... Kids don't miss a thing and will call it out! Well done.

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    2. Gillena CoxJune 6, 2025 at 10:13 AM

      🙂 thanks for your appreciation Dwight

      Much♡love

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  12. lynn__June 4, 2025 at 8:38 PM

    They got snagged playing "tag" :D

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  13. Yvette M CalleiroJune 5, 2025 at 11:38 AM

    Very cute, Gillena! I saw the two eyes in the midst as well and thought, how awkward! Lol!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Gillena CoxJune 6, 2025 at 10:14 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Yvette

      Much♡love

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  14. EricaStaJune 6, 2025 at 10:09 AM

    Your poem is wonderful again.

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  15. Gillena CoxJune 6, 2025 at 10:14 AM

    Happy you dropped by Heidrun

    Much♡love

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  16. pvcann.comJune 9, 2025 at 9:26 AM

    Now that made me laugh, great fun Gillena

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  17. Gillena CoxJune 9, 2025 at 4:18 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Paul

    Much♡love

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