SUN FIELDS
They set out early to harvest sunfruit
Earthlings thought the sun was a star
Those earthlings their thoughts are so cute
Woman carry a large earthen jar
For the radiant fields are ripe and a-plenty
© gillena cox 2024
SUN FIELDS
They set out early to harvest sunfruit
Earthlings thought the sun was a star
Those earthlings their thoughts are so cute
Woman carry a large earthen jar
For the radiant fields are ripe and a-plenty
© gillena cox 2024
Love it. Life on the sun. Maybe that could be our next destination!
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This is beautifully executed, Gillena! Thank you so much for writing to the prompt ❤️❤️
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Yours is the first poem about the sun, Gillena, and closer to home than most of the others. I love the thought of harvesting sunfruit – I wonder how it would taste – in ‘radiant fields are ripe and a-plenty’.
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Living in the sun is so surreal and creative. Love it when that happens.
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A destination that hot seems like a place were at least we would never be cold.
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