Monday, January 22, 2024

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 Sorting Out The Sky

A pinch of morning,

Now with dawn setting,

Sliver of silver,

Radiance giver.


Oh sky! what summons you

To tease at us so?

 Feathered harbingers,

Noisy bringers,


Of new occurences;

Are sure to find references,

In measure of man's mind,

Who isn't always kind.

gillenacox2024


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24 comments:

  1. Kim M. RussellJanuary 22, 2024 at 4:33 PM

    I can just imagine you sorting out the sky, Gillena! Deft rhyming, and I love the ‘pinch of morning’ and ‘radiance giver.

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  2. brudbergJanuary 22, 2024 at 4:40 PM

    Love the rhyming, it paints a wonderful carrebean picture.

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  3. Sanaa RizviJanuary 22, 2024 at 4:40 PM

    This is absolutely stellar writing, Gillena! I love the idea of musing with the sky ❤️❤️

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  4. Gillena CoxJanuary 22, 2024 at 4:42 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much♡love

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  5. DiJanuary 22, 2024 at 5:09 PM

    I love a pinch of morning...and the sliver of silver and radiance giver...sounds like a beautiful morning.

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  6. Dwight L. RothJanuary 22, 2024 at 5:25 PM

    I love your inspirational morning poem, Gillena.

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  7. Gillena CoxJanuary 22, 2024 at 5:27 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

    Much♡love

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  8. Arcadia MariaJanuary 22, 2024 at 9:11 PM

    I really like "pinch of morning". Lovely poem.

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  9. GraceJanuary 22, 2024 at 9:36 PM

    Love this one: Feathered harbingers,

    Noisy bringers.

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  10. Gillena CoxJanuary 22, 2024 at 10:15 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Grace

    Much♡love

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  11. LisaJanuary 22, 2024 at 11:37 PM

    Oh, what a wonderful way to put it, a "pinch of morning"!

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  12. David BogomolnyJanuary 23, 2024 at 6:28 AM

    Gillena,

    Your rhythmic play and captivating imagery convey a wonderful sense of mystery and anticipation!

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  13. Merril D. SmithJanuary 23, 2024 at 7:54 AM

    Lovely, Gillena! I've just looked out to see that "Sliver of silver,
    Radiance giver" as the sun is coming up. 💙

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  14. Gillena CoxJanuary 23, 2024 at 10:52 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Merril

    Much♡love

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  15. DoraJanuary 23, 2024 at 12:35 PM

    Beautiful imagery, Gillena! Nicely done Q.

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  16. Gillena CoxJanuary 24, 2024 at 1:06 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Dora

    Much♡love

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  17. paeansunpluggedJanuary 28, 2024 at 10:57 PM

    What a lovely morning poem with wonderful rhymes! 💙

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  18. pvcann.comJanuary 29, 2024 at 3:49 AM

    I love this Gillena, and I muse about the feathered harbingers, I look for them every morn.

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