Monday, November 13, 2023

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 Photo by De Jackson courtesy dVerse poetry pub

Poetic Moon

Should all the adjectives be

As comely as me?

Describing, prescribing quality

No even asked for necessarily 


Who howls at a round moon

If not a wolfish banter too soon

Released to a sultry night

Or even might 


There be a dreamer coining words

© gillenacox 2023


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20 comments:

  1. WhimsyGizmoNovember 13, 2023 at 6:37 PM

    Beautiful, Gillena. She is poetic, indeed.

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    1. Gillena CoxNovember 14, 2023 at 9:22 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation De

      Muchđź–¤love

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  2. Merril D. SmithNovember 13, 2023 at 7:17 PM

    Beautiful, Gillena! đź’™

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    1. Gillena CoxNovember 14, 2023 at 9:25 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Merril

      Muchđź–¤love

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  3. Arcadia MariaNovember 13, 2023 at 9:08 PM

    Lovely poem, Gillena.

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    1. Gillena CoxNovember 14, 2023 at 9:25 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Arcadia

      Muchđź–¤love

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  4. K.HartlessNovember 13, 2023 at 9:45 PM

    So much cleverness in this on, Gillena. May you forever flip those coined verses.

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  5. DoraNovember 13, 2023 at 10:39 PM

    And you coin your words so well!

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    1. Gillena CoxNovember 14, 2023 at 9:27 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Dora

      Muchđź–¤love

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  6. brudbergNovember 14, 2023 at 4:09 AM

    We have cincerely to be dreamers.

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  7. Kim M. RussellNovember 14, 2023 at 4:41 AM

    A wistful quadrille, Gillena. I love your poetic, comely moon, the ‘wolfish banter’ and ‘dreamer coining words’.

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  8. Gillena CoxNovember 14, 2023 at 9:28 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Kim

    Muchđź–¤love

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  9. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comNovember 14, 2023 at 12:21 PM

    Oooh, I always love a sultry night!

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  10. Ken / rivrvlogrNovember 14, 2023 at 4:00 PM

    The moon inspires every poet.

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  11. David BogomolnyNovember 19, 2023 at 10:29 AM

    "Released to a sultry night"

    Beautiful, Gillena!

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. Gillena CoxNovember 19, 2023 at 3:08 PM

      Thanks for your appreciation David

      Muchđź–¤love

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