Tuesday, January 17, 2023

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FIRST SNOW

This is strange all very strange.

Outside the air is like an airconditioned shopping mall;

Inside the shopping mall its surprisingly warm,

I'm wearing one of my sister's coats,

Going to buy a pair of high heeled boots that go way up to my calves.

Christmas reindeers with red noses

are visible on high shelves.

I haven't heard a parang tune; not a single one.

This is strange all very strange.

Everywhere i go they must be steering at my wide-eyed amazement.

I haven't seen a green tree about;

You know, like the mango Vere tree across the street back home, 

even though it bears no mangoes this time of the year. 

But there will be a kiskadee perched,

On the topmost branch. 

How they stay there,  it never ceases to amaze me.

This is strange all very strange.

I wouldn't say i am easily amazed,

But just that some things are truly amazing;

Like when my sister calls me to the half opened door.

There are white feathery thingies falling from the sky,

My natural response to this awesome spectacle is to cup my hands, 

trying to capture a handful.

Oh so this is what snowflakes are 

All about!

I am a happy tourist to a winter sky.

This is strange all very strange.

No way no how will i ever see that back home.

We buy at Christmas time decorations: baubles, 

a gauzy stuff called angel hair, and packs of course white granules labled snow. 

FIRST SNOW© gillena cox 2023



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12 comments:

  1. i am so used to be being cold at this time of year, being warm would feell odd to me.

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  2. I can’t imagine there has ever been snow in the Caribbean, Gillena. Like Rog, although I cannot stand snow, I am kind of used to it. Your poem gives me an idea what it must be like for someone to experience snow for the first time. I love the line: ‘I am a happy tourist to a winter sky’.

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  3. Thanks for dropping by Kim

    Much❤love

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  4. A wonderful write, Gillena. We buy granules labeled snow! It must be very different having warm weather and no cold at Christmas time.

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  5. This is such a breathtakingly beautiful poem, Gillena! I especially like; "There are white feathery thingies falling from the sky, My natural response to this awesome spectacle is to cup my hands."💘💘 Thank you so much for writing to the prompt!

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  6. Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much❤love

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  7. I could only imagine how strange snow would seem if you never seen it before.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Björn

      Much❤love

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  8. " I am a happy tourist to a winter sky." This sums up your beautiful poem very well, Gillena. :)

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  9. Thanks for your appreciation kittyverses

    Much❤love

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