[Today'mosaic: Flowers And A Scribble]
QUADRILLE BLUE
Were it not for ink blots on
Blue pleated skirts, one
Could have pondered heaven
In colours ruddy or golden, even
If the drill masters chalked
Formulas of h20 and balked
Footsteps etched forever on the moon;
Mystery clung to distance all to soon.
QUADRILLE BLUE © gillena cox 2020
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You've heard about the Monday Blues well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or
eg the rite of afternoon tea). Welcome to Monday WRites #254: A Happy Monday to all ❧✿❧
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Blog hopping today with
Mosaic Monday
#88: Glory in the garden
AND
Quadrille #107 Blue Monday
Today's prompt from Kim is "blue"
REVISIT
13 JuLY 2016
13 JuLY 2015
...sky is blue 2015
ENJOY THE MUSIC: All Too Soon (Stephen Hatfield) - Kokopelli and Mascato
What a pretty flower! I hope you have a beautiful week my friend! Hugs!
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ink blots on
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Sounds like you may be in trouble on this one! We you in the drill team for the marching band?
I like the line "mystery clung to distance." Very evocative!
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Sorry i threw you off track with this one. "Blue pleated skirts" primary school girls here in T&T 🇹🇹 growing up memories😊 drill masters = teachers making us reapeat stuff over and over
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...Gillena, I hope that your July is off to a great start. Take care and enjoy your day.
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Lovely poem. Gillena
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Thanks for dropping by Dale
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Fascinating poem that feels very deep, Gillena. Not sure why my email address is showing up in the "comment as" spot and it isn't even an email address I use much anymore.
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Happy you dropped by Lisa
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What a coincidence, Gillena, years ago, I had a skirt with a blue ink blot pattern on it! I love the lines:
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Mystery clung to distance all too soon.’
Thank you for your appreciation Kim
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Hello, Love the poem, flowers and mosaic! Enjoy your day, have a happy week ahead.
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Gillena, I have to translate your Poem, to understand the poetry.
ReplyDeleteAnd this song is wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
Stay healthy and well, dear blogfriend.
Happy you dropped my Erica
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I don't think I understand all of this poem, but I do love the sound of it!
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Though it was “indigo blue", “blue pleated skirt” evoked my high school days. It was part of school uniform. Thank you for your visit and kind words.
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Aha! Thanks for yoyr appreciation Yoko
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Nice writing skills!
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Gillena, you instantly brought me back to 12, ink-stained hands, and the blue and gold plaid vest and pleated skirt Mama sewed for me. It was one of my favorite outfits. Your last two lines got me thinking how it would've been nice back then at 12 to be encouraged to reach for the moon. But, as I write that, I realize my parents did. Thank you, Friend. :-)
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interesting! I did not know you had this blog. :) Fine images in your mosaic :)
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Ah ha! Here you are! Your profile does not link to your blog. Thanks for your visit.
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Gillena - only you can make a scribble look so elegant. Thanks for linking to Mosaic Monday!
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It's been a rough week, sorry I'm so late.
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Dawn aka Spatulas On Parade
Happy you dropped by Dawn 😊
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Such an evocative verse, bringing back memories of school days long ago, lovely collage too.
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Thanks for your appreciation Maggie
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