Thursday, September 25, 2025

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 A Play of Lights - Rengay between Gillena Cox & David (ben Alexander) Bogomolny 

with my eyes i trace 

a pattern of stars at dawn -

praise for a new day/gc


tears blur one small boy’s efforts

to outline big sheriff’s badge/db


a yellow alert -

the way colours shape our

weather and warnings/gc


night rains streak the glass -

she runs the red turns too quick

on slick, empty road/db


office noises left behind

returning to home alone/gc


an owl keeps steady

while headlights veer and scatter 

through the storm-soaked dark/db


Collaboration Note: The Rengay is a short form created by Gary Gay

 'A Play of Lights' is a Rengay between Gillena Cox - St James, Trinidad & David (ben Alexander) Bogomolny  - Jerusalem, Israel.

Start date: September 15th 2025

End  date: September 17th 2025

Written: via email


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14 comments:

  1. I enjoyed this collaboration between you and David, Gillena, and the different ways of looking at light: in ‘a pattern of stars at dawn’, through tears, rain and darkness.

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  2. Thank you for your appreciation Kim

    Much♡love

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  3. How lovely to read this collaboration. Cheers to you and David.

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  4. Thank you for your appreciation Grace

    Much♡love

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  5. Light through dark and blur. I think we're on the same page today.

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  6. A very interesting collaboration between you and David. Well done.

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  7. Interesting collaboration. I could imagine myself driving on a rainy night.

    Found my way here from the dVerse Poets Hub :)

    Cheers,
    CRD

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  8. Very nice! I hope you continue to do this, so we may continue to read.

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  9. Thanks for your appreciation Rosemary

    Much♡love

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  10. Lovely imagery and flow of words! Jae

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  11. Thanks for your appreciation Jae

    Much♡love

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