Eternidade: The Fold
Gotta focus, spot on,Every corner ever shadow,
Is drawn, to the dream-tron,
Into the spectacle
That is eternity, spot on;
Where is the nuturing heart?
Will it recover the forlorn?
The disillusioned?
The desire to belong?
To something greater than self,
Just gotta focus, spot on.
© gillena cox 2025
I love the focus specially the ending lines:
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Just gotta focus, spot on.
Thank you for your appreciation Grace
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Your Fold form once again shows its versatility Gillena - Spot on!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Frewin
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I like that you give us the encouragement and the things to focus on. 💙
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Merril
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The desire to belong?
ReplyDeleteTo something greater than self,
Just gotta focus, spot on.
What is life other than this?
Thank you for your appreciation Reena
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This is "cool" and yes, the eye goes straight to that spot!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Helen
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Sounds like good advice, to me.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Rosemary
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Belongining is so very important.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Björn
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