Monday, May 19, 2025

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[ArtFromElenaV, google]

Quadrille Quiet
Rain in torrents
Daylight dim
No birdsongs sent
Given from Him

Rain and floods
 Reading time
At home or at odds
quiet as a mime

TV lady talks
Of moisture in the air
Under umbrella walk
All is fair    

And  loud rain in torrents
© gillena cox 2025

20 comments:

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Arcadia

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  2. I love the contrast between the torrential rain and the quiet reading time, Gillena! The sound of rain on an umbrella is delightful.

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  3. Thanks for your appreciation Kim

    Much♡love

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Merril

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  5. I love reading when it's raining. Great poem, Gillena!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Yvette

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  6. The sound of rain is a perfect backdrop

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  7. Thanks for your appreciation Björn

    Much♡love

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  8. This is beautiful, Gillena! ❤️❤️

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

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  9. Weather forecasters are the only ones I know who are paid for being wrong. ❤️❤️

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  10. Gillena, I really like how “quiet as a mime” echoes the hush you’ve built around the storm. Feels like a rainy day wrapped in reflection.

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation David

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Sara

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  12. Lovely! I too love reading when its raining.

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  13. Thanks for your appreciation Punam

    Much♡love

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