Tuesday, February 14, 2023

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PETAL DIVINING

A petal pluck a petal fall

A petal pluck a petal fall

Burning hot for love's fraction 


A petal pluck a petal fall

A petal pluck a petal fall

Trembling heart pose a question


A petal pluck a petal fall

A petal pluck a petal fall

Questioning in silly action


A petal pluck a petal fall

A petal pluck a petal fall

Trusting in a daisy reaction

© gillena cox 2023

BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
CHALLENGED: to write a love poem. Bear in mind that it doesn’t necessarily need to be romantic. It can also be dark and speak of ache and loss. It can transcend words and language. It can describe what the heart has been carrying within for a long time. The possibilities are endless.


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6 comments:

  1. robkistnerFebruary 15, 2023 at 10:50 AM

    Wonderful piece! Happy Valentine’s Day.

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  2. Sanaa RizviFebruary 15, 2023 at 2:47 PM

    This is absolutely splendid, Gillena! I so adore the plucking of petals and posing of questions - classic take on love - thank you so much for writing to the prompt 💖💖💖

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  3. Gillena CoxFebruary 15, 2023 at 9:27 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much❤love

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  4. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comFebruary 15, 2023 at 9:30 PM

    LOVE this take on the person pulling out the petals one by one....she loves me, she loves me not! Made me smile. Hope to see you at OLN LIVE - we're on Thursday AND Saturday this week!

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  5. Gillena CoxFebruary 16, 2023 at 6:50 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Lillian

    Much❤love

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