Tuesday, July 19, 2022

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[image from google]

FEATHERED CHOREOGRAPHY

There they stood 

She in her white lace and he

In his suit of endless eyes 

Both had their beauty tamed

Tucked away as they pecked 

At bowls of feed 


We glanced at them

Waiting for arrogant displays

But we got none of that

They were hungry so it seemed

Or maybe in a peckish mood 

So we lost interest in them


But further along the path

Under a big shady tree

Another male he alone

Would fill our request for awe

This peacock fanned out

His endless eyed feathered display

And we stood rivited and watched him

FEATHERED CHOREOGRAPHY  © gillena cox 2022

 BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

Dverse – Poetics – Fractals – Down the Rabbit Hole and Up, Up, and Away
My poem is a response to the challenge to
1) Use any of the definitions, examples, images, or application of fractals to inspire you to write whatever strikes your fancy.

REVISIT
 

7 comments:

  1. There shall be no fractal before its time :) I really like how you pulled the reader into the experience. I felt like I was there, walking with you. A favorite part:
    "She in her white lace and he
    In his suit of endless eyes"

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  2. I liked the gradual progression of awe and interest in the poem, wonderfully written. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. :)

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  3. Thanks for your appreciation kittyverses

    Much💚love

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  4. Happy you dropped by Grace

    Much💚love

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  5. What a display for sure! Wonderful imagery in your words, Gillena! 💙

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  6. Thank you for your appreciation Punam

    Much💚love

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