Tuesday, January 25, 2022

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WHOLENESS

All the people i have met

In a lifespan designed

They have shifted sand

Beneath the toes of evenings


Relationships ebb leaving

Longing sighs and tender looks

Angry suns burnish cool skin

To an already cinnamon glow


In truth each day is a universe

In which we are tangled in the light 

Of stars only wanting to be 

The natural twinklers we are

© gillena cox 2022



BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

“In truth each day is a universe in which we are tangled in the light of stars.”- Horses, Jim Harrison




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23 comments:

  1. ChristineJanuary 25, 2022 at 6:19 PM

    Aw, there is an innocent sweetness in your words. Hopeful that what they believe really is true.

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  2. Gillena CoxJanuary 25, 2022 at 6:47 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Christine

    Much💙love

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  3. Sanaa RizviJanuary 25, 2022 at 8:56 PM

    This is incredibly beautiful writing, Gillena! I love; "They have shifted sand
    beneath the toes of evenings." Yes! 💝💝

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  4. ms_liliJanuary 25, 2022 at 9:56 PM

    I like how you used the poetry line. Each day is a universe...

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  5. Gillena CoxJanuary 25, 2022 at 11:00 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Lili

    Much💙love

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  6. David BogomolnyJanuary 26, 2022 at 6:03 AM

    Well, Gillena, you, for one, are definitely a natural twinkler!!

    Much love,
    David [ben Alexander]
    http://skepticskaddish.com/

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    1. Gillena CoxJanuary 26, 2022 at 12:12 PM

      AwwwwWhat a nice compliment. Humble bow to you David.

      Thanks for dropping by

      Much💙love

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  7. TruedessaJanuary 26, 2022 at 7:37 AM

    The desire to be a star in the universe...shine on my friend...

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    1. Gillena CoxJanuary 26, 2022 at 12:12 PM

      Thanks for your appreciation Truedessa

      Much💙love

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  8. Ken / rivrvlogrJanuary 26, 2022 at 11:31 AM

    Yes, "each day is a universe"

    Twinkle on! :)

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  9. Gillena CoxJanuary 26, 2022 at 12:13 PM

    Happy you dropped by Ken

    Much💙love

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  10. brudbergJanuary 26, 2022 at 2:38 PM

    Love how you made the lines your own. beautiful

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  11. lynn__January 26, 2022 at 4:57 PM

    This was simply delightful and you worked the quote in so smoothly...twinkle, twinkle little stars!

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  12. Gillena CoxJanuary 26, 2022 at 5:39 PM

    Thanks for dropping by Lynn

    Much💙love

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  13. forestbatherJanuary 27, 2022 at 9:00 AM

    Really like the way you played with descriptions here...the toes of evenings.....wonderful!

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  14. Gillena CoxJanuary 27, 2022 at 12:56 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Ain

    Much💙love

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  15. HelenJanuary 27, 2022 at 1:02 PM

    You write of life's ebb and flow quite beautifully ....

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  16. Gillena CoxJanuary 27, 2022 at 3:54 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Helen

    Much💙love

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  17. IngridJanuary 28, 2022 at 6:47 PM

    'In truth each day is a universe

    In which we are tangled in the light'

    - that's so lovely, Gillena!

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  18. Gillena CoxJanuary 29, 2022 at 6:41 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Ingrid

    Much💙love

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  19. Gillena CoxFebruary 23, 2022 at 10:00 AM

    WHOLENESS
    💙
    ALSO POSTED AT Poemhunter.cox February 2022

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