Wednesday, July 10, 2019

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Cinque Terre, Italy - by Kookay

SEASONS MAY
Now that the Poui have gone shy of blossoms,
Blue green outline of mountains hem the sky line.
Grey clouds will skirt their way into many a morning
There to stay weeping,
Hushing excited thrill of dawn birds,
Shooing them off to hiding places.
Seasons come and sometimes linger before they go,
Ah but morning breaks, regardless of the
Her sun, dipping into the horizon of hours,
No matter how low.
SEASONS MAY © gillena cox 2019

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32 comments:

  1. Sumana RoyJuly 10, 2019 at 11:53 AM

    So gorgeous! How beautifully Nature reveals Herself to us with all the sights and sounds. A lovely capture. "Seasons come and sometimes linger before they go," Hmm. Don't like it when summer decides to linger.

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 10, 2019 at 1:40 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 10, 2019 at 12:20 PM

    I love the magic of dawn, rising, no matter how low the horizon.

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 10, 2019 at 1:40 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Sherry

      Much🕊❤🕊love

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 10, 2019 at 1:02 PM

    Most of us really do look forward to morning, no matter the weather. Of course, night owls will disagree with me!

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 10, 2019 at 1:41 PM

      😄thanks for your appreciation Maggie

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  4. Sanaa RizviJuly 10, 2019 at 1:23 PM

    My goodness this is breathtakingly beautiful, Gillena!💖💖💖

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  5. Gillena CoxJuly 10, 2019 at 1:42 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  6. tonispencerJuly 10, 2019 at 2:45 PM

    "...sun, dipping into the horizon of hours" such a beautiful line Gillena. I love it.

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 10, 2019 at 6:26 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Toni

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  7. Myrna R.July 10, 2019 at 2:51 PM

    What a sweet and beautiful poem Gillena. Made me feel good about being alive and able to witness dawn.

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 10, 2019 at 6:27 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Myrna

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  8. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost July 10, 2019 at 4:09 PM

    Beautifully written! Like Sumana, I don't like it when the summer lingers too long. It almost always does.

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  9. Gillena CoxJuly 10, 2019 at 6:27 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Cie

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  10. Old EggJuly 10, 2019 at 7:26 PM

    This poem really read well Gillena, full marks for you!

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 11, 2019 at 12:25 AM

      Thank you for your appteciation Robin

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  11. TruedessaJuly 10, 2019 at 8:03 PM

    I wake up to a heart full of joy each dawn, it's the storms of the day that dampen my mood. Lovely poem!

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 11, 2019 at 12:26 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Trudessa

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  12. H. HennenburgJuly 10, 2019 at 9:09 PM

    Your words are so alive with colour and light. Just beautiful. Thank you!

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  13. Gillena CoxJuly 11, 2019 at 12:27 AM

    Happy you dropped by H

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  14. MarjaJuly 11, 2019 at 1:19 AM

    Wow love this poem Gorgeous images like "Poui have gone shy of blossoms" and"Her sun, dipping into the horizon of hours"

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 11, 2019 at 6:25 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Marja

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  15. Khaya RonkainenJuly 11, 2019 at 2:34 AM

    Your piece is a poetic sigh, beautiful!

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 11, 2019 at 6:26 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Khaya

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  16. ThotpurgeJuly 11, 2019 at 8:27 AM

    morning breaks..regardless... that is so poignant.. and hopeful as well.

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    1. Gillena CoxJuly 11, 2019 at 6:26 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Rajani

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  17. Linda Lee LybergJuly 11, 2019 at 9:40 AM

    I love this Gillena. And I enjoy seeing the morning come.

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  18. Gillena CoxJuly 11, 2019 at 6:27 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Linda

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  19. Kim M. RussellJuly 12, 2019 at 2:33 AM

    Beautiful, Gillena - I love the alliteration in the metaphor ‘mountains hem the sky line’, and the way you’ve continued the sewing metaphor into ‘Grey clouds will skirt their way into many a morning’. And the final lines are stunning!

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  20. Gillena CoxJuly 12, 2019 at 4:06 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Kim

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  21. kaykualaJuly 14, 2019 at 4:41 AM

    Very true Gillena! It is a bother when seasons linger on contrary to expectations! It is upsetting to the orderly pattern one is used to!

    Hank

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  22. Gillena CoxJuly 15, 2019 at 5:57 PM

    Happy you dropped by Hank

    Much❤🕊❤love

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