THE PICNIC
This poem is a young family
This poem sits in Savannah grass
This poem is time out
She toddles up close to the pond,
But before she dares step in,
Dad grabs her struggling arms.
Mum smiles through pink lipstick;
Poui abloom against azure sky,
Kites vie in competitive swoops,
This wind knows how to lift a skirt,
Better then to sit or wear jeans.
This is all good, a Sunday in
The season of Easter, a basket
Stays the kente cloth spread, and
Cheese sandwiches taste better.
A young family fills this poem
Sprawled out on the Savannah greens
For a Sunday afternoon picnic.
THE PICNIC © gillena cox 2019
#NOTE: In the above poem The original 'Boomerang Metaphor form' is corrupted, as the title does not include the BM refrain and the last verse strays a bit from the The original form, in the way the verse 1, is repeated in the verse 4
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I absolutely LOVE your Boomerang poem. I often stray off the original rules. I can see and almost feel the happiness of this picnic........love the wind catching skirts, the kites, the young family on the grass. Happy days.
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A delightful read. Love the image of th e young family enjoying a day out :)
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This wind knows how to lift a skirt,
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yes the wind does know how to play with us...very nice...bkm
Thanks for dropping by bkm
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I especially love the referance to the Savannah grass.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the revisit Sherry
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The picnic is an adventure that can embrace us or put us off them for ever by the hazards you may encounter when dining "en plein air".
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This is so delightful and full of fun, like the wind itself. Also love the colors.
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A beautiful image of a family picnic, and this a great line too.
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I enjoyed your picnic boomerang, Gillena. I especially love the line ‘A young family fills this poem’.
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Beautiful...Just clean old family bonding time, out in the sun with a basket of food in tow.Delightful visuals...reminds me of my childhood days spent outdoors!!
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A lovely family picnic. I like your ending the way it is.
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A magnificent reflection back to happy days filled with fun!
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Thank you for your apprecistion Eileen
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Colorful picture ... and words !
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