FRAGRANT CONVERSATIONS
This poem is a flower -
Flirtatious as the skirts of dancers,
Furling in the Bele rituals;
Hedged near my front gate,
Crepe Jasmines, milk white;
This poem is a bud opened -
Perky yellow dabs, as sharp
As pin pricks, dotting her centers,
To sunlight, and nightfall
When she sounds the loudest,
Fragrant conversations with breezes;
This poem is a miracle -
Who designs the awe of blossoming,
Knowing when smiles should delight
Faces, with wonder and gratefulness,
Sadness with light and thankfulness;
This poem is a flower
This poem is a bud opened
This poem is a miracle.
FRAGRANT CONVERSATIONS © gillena cox 2016
[bele dancer from google dot com]
Prompt Nights – Nothing is more memorable than Scent – [14]
Oh Gillena :D this poem is so so beautiful (especially when read out loud) love the images of Crepe Jasmines, milk white hedged near the front gate and the idea of fragrant conversations with breezes is just delightful! Beautifully penned.
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Sanaa
Happy you dropped in to read mine Sanaa
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Love this poem (after the style of Hannah's form - way to go) It is full of color, scent and emotion. Splendid!
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Who designs the awe of blossoming,
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It brings on the blossoming of success to the satisfaction of everyone with all the smiles. It gets a nice feeling as what good poems should aspire for. Wonderful write Gillena!
Hank
Thanks for your appreciation Hank
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Love the flirtatious skirts... and the miracle. ♥
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in to read mine Magaly
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a beautiful boomerang metaphor...all praise to the Designer...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Sumana
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Such pure delight Gillena - the smells and atmosphere beautifully gathered - most hopeful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in Jae
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Lovely fragrant conversations and the belle dancer; a pairing that evokes pleasant images whilst indulging senses.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Khaya
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Beautiful images of Jasmine flowers dancing in the breeze ...I can smell them now, thank you :D XXX
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