Friday, January 1, 2016

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PERFECTION
thankfulness
processing the perfection
of human spirit
a new year dawns festive
blasts of firecrackers sound
© gillena cox 2016


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Location: St James, Port of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago

23 comments:

  1. Sanaa RizviJanuary 1, 2016 at 10:57 PM

    A wonderful poem depicting the dawn of a joyous new year :D thank you so much for your participation Gillena :D


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Gillena CoxJanuary 4, 2016 at 5:48 PM

      Happy to be part of Prompt Nights Sanaa, thanks for inviting me

      much love...

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  2. C.C.January 1, 2016 at 11:09 PM

    There is certainly perfection to be found in the mingling of thankfulness and the human spirit!!

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    1. Gillena CoxJanuary 4, 2016 at 5:49 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation CC

      much love...

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  3. MaryJanuary 1, 2016 at 11:24 PM

    Every new year is a blank slate, and we once again have a chance to strive for perfection...

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    1. Gillena CoxJanuary 4, 2016 at 5:49 PM

      we certainly do Mary, thanks for dropping by to read mine

      much love...

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  4. Sumana RoyJanuary 2, 2016 at 10:48 AM

    That's perfection indeed...

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  5. Debi SwimJanuary 2, 2016 at 11:50 AM

    A hopeful tanka - lovely

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    1. Gillena CoxJanuary 4, 2016 at 5:51 PM

      Thanks for dropping in to read mine Debi

      much love...

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  6. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)January 3, 2016 at 11:20 PM

    "festive blasts" right back to you - delightful poem

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  7. SreejaJanuary 4, 2016 at 9:02 AM

    Delightful!!

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  8. J.N.T.January 4, 2016 at 10:14 AM

    yay! firecrackers welcoming a perceived to be perfect new year! enjoyed it!

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  9. Susie ClevengerJanuary 5, 2016 at 2:28 AM

    What a bright introduction to a new year.

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  10. UnknownJanuary 5, 2016 at 9:37 AM

    I love your tanka! Processing perfection takes a lifetime.

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  11. Purba chakrabortyJanuary 5, 2016 at 4:52 PM

    Beautiful poem. I find a lot of hope exuding from this tanka :)

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    1. Gillena CoxJanuary 6, 2016 at 1:35 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Purba

      Much love...

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  12. SuyashJJanuary 16, 2016 at 4:15 AM

    nicely written !

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