Friday, October 2, 2015

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Carnivorous pitcher plants on top of Mount Roraima from a google dot com search


RORAIMA PITCHERS
The lure of red in this surreal pliant
Mystify insects as if by magic chant
They lose their way
For as best they may
Into the stomachs of the pitcher plant

RORAIMA PITCHERS © gillena cox 2015


Written for Hannah's prompt
Transforming with Nature's Wonders
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
where the focus is Mount Roraima, and the landscape where Venezuala, Brazil and Guyana meet. Some of the oldest geological formations on earth, dating back to some two billion years ago in the precambrian.

12 comments:

  1. Ha, those poor little flies.. great choice to use a limerick.. very suitable for a Friday.

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  2. Carnivorous plants.......this is a cool response to the prompt.

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  3. I can hear that chant and feel the lure...wonderful! Thank you, for joining the challenge, Gillena!

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  4. Hiya...I really enjoyed this write out. One question: should "loose" be "lose"? Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Thanks Isadore. I'll edit. Yes it should be lose

      Much love...

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  5. I love how you turned this into a limerick style 5-liner. Very neat.

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