Monday, March 9, 2015

Monday WRites


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You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea).

This is week 4 of Monday WRites ❧✿❧ its open mic ❧✿❧ Welcome ❧✿❧ comment, email me, or link up



SLEEPLESS
when night,
insomnia
snags in her awesome grip,
tentacles of morning harrow
and snip
© gillena cox



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18 comments:

  1. LeoviMarch 9, 2015 at 3:12 PM

    I like very much, congratulations on this beautiful delicious works of art

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  2. JimMarch 10, 2015 at 6:25 PM

    Been there, Gillena. Last night. Being retired I can sleep later though when I finally do sleep. Still though the morning tentacles rake and scratch.
    I enjoyed reading this, it was fun to recall.
    ..

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 11, 2015 at 6:48 AM

      thank you for your appreciation Jim

      much love...

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  3. Sumana RoyMarch 10, 2015 at 9:57 PM

    ouch...morning becoming a nightmare...

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  4. M. A. S.March 11, 2015 at 1:26 AM

    -Tentacles of morning -
    I love this line and the image it creates.

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  5. brudbergMarch 11, 2015 at 3:27 AM

    Oh the morning snap.. sometimes those mornings are the worst as we feel it slowly approaching

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  6. Gillena CoxMarch 11, 2015 at 6:49 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Bjorn

    much love...

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  7. Vandana SharmaMarch 11, 2015 at 9:29 AM

    hmm after a saunday its hard to work on monday!!

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  8. Kerry O'ConnorMarch 11, 2015 at 10:34 AM

    Perfect description!

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  9. lynn__March 11, 2015 at 8:27 PM

    Oh, that's graphic...the tentacles! I've had mornings like that here's my haiku:
    http://madhatterpoetry.com/2015/01/27/vaporous-thoughts/

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  10. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerMarch 11, 2015 at 9:01 PM

    Oh I like this! It just really works!

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