Friday, January 23, 2015

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TOMORROWS
In breath, slowly.... slowly....
Awaken the pink clouds of morning dew
The eyelids of those sleepers
Those buds of adventures
Sheltered in sleep of ancient patternings
The fabric of colour fragrance and shape
Hungry for the light of solar rays
Supernova shinning day star - Sun
Pour your warm breath of life giving
Hope to the fires of tomorrows
Consume the void of night
© gillena cox

[64 words title included]

Written in response to
Words Count With Mama Zen...challenge - What are you hungry for? Tell me in 60 words or less . . . but take an extra ten if you can make me blush.

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20 comments:

  1. Consume the void of night...that's lovely.

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  2. I can so much feel this in my bones.. there is way too much night here in Sweden still ..

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  3. (◕‿◕。) Happy you dropped in Bjorn

    much love...

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  4. "in sleep of ancient patternings" I particularly enjoy this...excellent poem.

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  5. I really like "consume the void of night."

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  6. I really liked that you've made a contrast between light and dark in this, and that the poem itself is really warming.

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  7. Thank you for your appreciation Ken

    Much love...

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  8. Beautiful, and I like that you never said the word hunger or hungry.

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  9. Thank you for your appreciation Mary

    Much love ...

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  10. I like the words 'giving hope to the fires of tomorrow'. very optimistic thoughts! :)

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  11. Thank you for your appreciation Amrita

    Much love ...

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  12. Happy you dropped by Marian

    much love...



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  13. Lovely spiritual poem....enjoyed reading.

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  14. Thank you for your appreciation Sunil

    much love...

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  15. Happy you dropped in Susie

    much love...

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