Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Hands


good shepherd image from google dot com

whose hands are these? withered by years of painstaking measuring
these are the hands, like the hands adding minutes, adding seconds
those digits of time seared to finite moments of universal chiming
these are the hands of messy clay creating light of sea beacons

whose hands are these? withered by years of painstaking measuring
they are hands, invisible, resting on laurels of dancing marionettes
those digits of time seared to finite moments of universal chiming
these are the hands of nudging,tweerking, manipulating and disconnect
--gillena cox




written in response to the prompt at Poetry Jam "hands"




read also 'Dandelion'
In a chiaroscuro of shapes your hand,
Pledging a bouquet so winsome and,
Bursting with this gift desire of miles,
Of weightless flights to carve smiles,
On the moon or hearts aflame with... read the rest here

28 comments:

  1. happy you dropped in Vandana

    much love...

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  2. really a lovely piece...that whole first stanza made me smile....hands adding time...the hands of the creator in clay....nicely done gillena...happy wednesday

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  3. I enjoyed 'creating light of sea beacons,' which is a beautiful image!

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  4. thank you for your appreciation Brian

    much love...


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  5. thank you for your appreciation Mary

    much love...

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  6. really beautifully expressed and some sparkling images.

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  7. Thoughtful piece Gillena. Hands of time, hands of the creator. Nice.

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  8. Happy you dropped in Peggy

    Much love...

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  9. Happy you dropped in Humbug

    Much love...

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  10. So true, Gillena. Hands can be used for the best, or the worst.

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  11. thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

    much love...

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  12. Happy you dropped in Laurie

    much love...

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  13. Omnipresent hand on all of us. Well written :)

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  14. "whose hands are these" indeed... wonderful.

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  15. Happy you dropped in Donna

    much love...

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  16. Beautiful images and meaning in your lines, Gillena!

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