Tuesday, September 17, 2024

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Dream Rescue  - A Fold
Inbreath, what a handsome angel,

He flew into my plight, bringing

Just the right solution, the right gel,

Sweetening a tired night's dream;

I leave behind, a handsome angel,

Colours so intense are stressful,

One can fall into a pond pel mel,

Like the little adventurous Alice girl,

It's child play like Farmer In The Del;

O fantasy! whose reality are you

To craft such a handsome angel?
© gillena cox 2024


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14 comments:

  1. I enjoyed your fold that ends with a question, Gillena, the allusions to a children’s rhyme and a story, and the handsome angel ‘sweetening a tired night's dream’ – I could do with one too.

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  2. Thank you for your appreciation Kim

    much🤍love

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  3. I enjoyed your repetition of the angel, wings that tied together a lovely poem!

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  4. Thank you for your appreciation Nolcha

    much🤍love

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  5. Appreciate the form and repetition of handsome angel.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Grace

      much🤍love

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  6. Thank you for your appreciation Dwight

    much🤍love

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Björn

      much🤍love

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  8. Gillena, I love when beautiful angels visit in dreamland, and I wonder also, where they come from.

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  9. light-hearted yet with a serious question at the close ~

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  10. Thanks for your appreciation Grapeling

    much♡love

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