Monday, September 4, 2023

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[image courtesy dVerse poetry pub]

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Questions of Night - a quadrille

Sliver of moon, 
Conscious sky,
Behoved of wanting to smile, 
 Absence of stars,
Unyielding to  gentle breeze,
Silhouettes of trees 
Need your light:


Hush of night, 
Absent bird songs;
Will these hours linger into
 insomnia
Will dreams come to capture 
Longing of human hearts

© gillena cox 2023

 
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September Castles by Peter Davidson


First hints of our condition manifest:

Spite in the wind, mist-gauze across the moon,

Light chill, the spider’s filaments, blanched grass,

And two days as warm as the south change nothing at all.

A morning comes when you know this cannot end well.

Soon it will be no time for gathering in gardens

All too soon, my dears, it will be the weather

For Brahms quintets, for leaves drifting triste past the windows

Of those in their rooms alone for the duration,

For whom this is no time to build. Those now alone

Are going to remain so through this estranging season

Of reading, of writing emails as detailed as letters,

Of watching dry leaves grow sodden on empty pavements.

Rilke said this in lines that I last read in Edinburgh

With my most beautiful aunt in her later age

When, many things gone, she remembered those verse in German.

I got this poem from HERE

14 comments:

  1. I love the way you describe the night in your quadrille, Gillena, with its ‘conscious sky, / Behoved of wanting to smile’ and ‘absent bird songs’.

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  2. Well done, I like the idea of dreams coming to capture the longing of the human heart!

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  3. A beautiful quadrille, Gilenna. I hope your dreams will be peaceful. :)

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  4. Thanks for your appreciation Miriam

    Much🖤love

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  5. The moon always captures the imagination. I like the wondering if the narrator will sleep and if pleasant dreams will come.

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  6. Thanks for your appreciation Merril

    Much🖤love

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  7. The night can be such a beautiful time, still we need that sleep...

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  8. Thanks for your appreciation Björn

    Much🖤love

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  9. Nice poem for Quadrille, but, . . . It is sooo sad!! ;)
    (I think you wanted that way, you did a great job. Just plain forlorn.
    ..

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  10. Simply beautiful from start to finish, Gillena.

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  11. Thanks for your appreciation David

    Much🖤love

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