[image courtesy dVerse poetry pub]
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Questions of Night - a quadrille
Sliver of moon,
Conscious sky,
Behoved of wanting to smile,
Absence of stars,
Unyielding to gentle breeze,
Silhouettes of trees
Need your light:
Hush of night,
Absent bird songs;
Will these hours linger into
insomnia
Will dreams come to capture
Longing of human hearts
© gillena cox 2023
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September Castles by Peter Davidson
First hints of our condition manifest:
Spite in the wind, mist-gauze across the moon,
Light chill, the spider’s filaments, blanched grass,
And two days as warm as the south change nothing at all.
A morning comes when you know this cannot end well.
Soon it will be no time for gathering in gardens
All too soon, my dears, it will be the weather
For Brahms quintets, for leaves drifting triste past the windows
Of those in their rooms alone for the duration,
For whom this is no time to build. Those now alone
Are going to remain so through this estranging season
Of reading, of writing emails as detailed as letters,
Of watching dry leaves grow sodden on empty pavements.
Rilke said this in lines that I last read in Edinburgh
With my most beautiful aunt in her later age
When, many things gone, she remembered those verse in German.
I got this poem from HERE
I love the way you describe the night in your quadrille, Gillena, with its ‘conscious sky, / Behoved of wanting to smile’ and ‘absent bird songs’.
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Well done, I like the idea of dreams coming to capture the longing of the human heart!
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A beautiful quadrille, Gilenna. I hope your dreams will be peaceful. :)
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The moon always captures the imagination. I like the wondering if the narrator will sleep and if pleasant dreams will come.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Merril
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The night can be such a beautiful time, still we need that sleep...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Björn
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Nice poem for Quadrille, but, . . . It is sooo sad!! ;)
ReplyDelete(I think you wanted that way, you did a great job. Just plain forlorn.
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Simply beautiful from start to finish, Gillena.
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David
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Thanks for your appreciation David
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