Monday, August 21, 2023

1083

Unresolved
She wanted pineapple
Not green banana 

They bought from the market a bandana
A head cover to go to the chapel

He asked them to drive him
He didn't care to walk
All they did was stand and talk
A ploy to annoy him
© gillena cox 2023



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THIS IS MONDAY WRITES 408
A HAPPY AUGUST TO ALL

You've heard about the Monday Blues 
well this is Monday WRites  (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance for eg the rite of afternoon tea). 
verses

 
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The Meeting by Harriet Monroe, (1860-1936)
The ox-team and the automobile
Stood face to face on the long red road.
The long red road was narrow
At the turn of the hill,
And below was the sun-dancing river
Afoam over the rocks.

The mild-mannered beasts stood par, chewing their cud.
The stubble-bearded man from the mountains,
Rustier than his wagon,
Unmoving eyed the proud chauffeur.
The little ragged girl,
With sun-bleached hair,
Sitting on a hard, yellow-powdery bag,
Looked across at the smart motor hats of the ladies,
And their chiffon scarfs
That the light breeze fingered.
The proud chauffeur blew his horn,
But nothing moved –
Except the foaming, sun-dancing river down below.


Then he jerked his head,
And turned the wheel,
And slowly, carefully,
The automobile moved back over the long red road.

And the mild-mannered beasts lifted their feet,
And the stubble-bearded man flipped his rein,
And the ragged little girl looked ahead up the hill,
And the ox-team lumbered and limped over the long red road.

Found this poem HERE 
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23 comments:

  1. Love all the great sounds and inner rhyme here!

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  2. I love the wordplay here, so lively!

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  3. Thanks for your appreciation Björn

    Much💖love

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  4. Thanks for your appreciation Miriam

    Much💖love

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  5. Fun wordplay and imagery, Gillena! Happy Monday!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Merril

      Much💖love

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  6. They are having fun to annoy him. Well, you don't always get what you want.

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  7. Very nice use of the prompt! Love your poem of life in the real world!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

      Much💖love

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  8. I like your rhymes and hope she gets the pineapple!

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    1. 😊Thanks for your appreciation Lynn

      Much💖love

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  9. I can't tell what's worse: the waiting or the lack of pineapple.

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  10. A crazy fast-moving poem, Gillena, an opposite of the characters just standing and talking.
    ..

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  11. I like the title, Gillena, and the jaunty rhymes! I also love the idea of being able to buy such, for me, exotic fruits and a bandana in a market, and the way the women just stood and talked!

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    1. 😊Thanks for your appreciation Kim

      Much💖love

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  12. Wow, you're such a good storyteller, Gillena

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation David

      Much💖love

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  13. A Quadrille with humor ... loved it.

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  14. Thank you for your appreciation Helen

    Much💖love

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