REMEMBERING MELODIES
Bird song at dawn belongs to awakening,
Grey sky has a chance now to colour brag,
Then to silver, some pinks are showing;
How in the planet's name do those birds
Remember melodies, dawn belongs to awakening;
Coolness of morning shadows,
Lend to a new day of enjoying;
Vanilla ice cream will savour dessert spoons
Licked to childhood rememberings,
Awe belongs in every sunset,
Gratitude at sunrise, dawn belongs to awakening.
REMEMBERING MELODIES © gillena cox 2023
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Oh yes, Gillena, bird song at dawn definitely belongs to awakening. Good question, how do birds remember melodies?
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Bird songs at dawn and awe inspiring sunset, with ice cream in between would make anyone happy! This is lovely, Gillena. ❤️
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Your beautiful poem awakens the senses, Gillena!
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Bird song at dawn is always wonderful! 💙
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Our all, moods, pleasure, eating, and more are influenced by Mom Nature.
ReplyDeleteNice write, I enjoyed the birds. From early morning ours leave their nests and find a fence or roof peak from which to chat with each other and sing to us. I especially like talking with the Mocking Birds, "Who cooks for you" in my shrill voice I call. For sure if they are around they will talk back to me. Sometimes I'll add a second, third, or fourth "you" and they will return with some extra "you's" of their own.
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An awesome poem, Gillena .. at 4:15am our birds begin their song, most wonderful way to begin my day.
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Very nicely done, Gillena.
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Lovely poem Gillena.
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Beautiful poem, i liked how you captured sunrise and sunset!
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Bird song, vanilla ice cream, sunsets...what's not to love!
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Birdsong at dawn to greet a new day and beautiful sunsets to wrap up the day! Both overwhelm the human mind! Great wordcraft Gillena!
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How do birds know which song to sing? I never gave that a thought!
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This is a simply magical write, Gillena!
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