Thursday, October 28, 2021

859

Zinnia image from google dot com

WHORL OF ZINNIA PETALS - A Fold Poem

The zinnias were single whorled

They were pretty pinks and bright

Back in the day when i was a child

How i loved  too the orange bursts.

Our zinnias were single whorled

The Barbados Pride and the Vandas

The variety of colour always heeded

Reds, purples, and sunny yellows

A bouquet in which i ever reveled

Days of pulling out weeds by hand 

My zinnias were single whorled

 WHORL OF ZINNIA PETALS © gillena cox 2021


NOTE
How to construct The Fold Poem HERE and HERE


REVISIT

AND


ENJOY THE MUSIC:  

Link to Sweetest 100 Days of Christmas in T&T HERE HAPPY SEASON
Posted by at
Labels: , , ,
Location: St James, Port of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago

31 comments:

  1. Linda Lee LybergOctober 28, 2021 at 5:21 PM

    A beautiful poem about one of my favorite flowers Gillena!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Magaly GuerreroOctober 28, 2021 at 5:23 PM

    There is something about beautiful bloom, about working to keep them so... that stays with us.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 2:00 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Magaly

      Much💜love

      Delete
  3. JimOctober 28, 2021 at 11:14 PM

    Pulling weeds in a flower garden when the flowers are in bloom or hoeing weeds in a blooming orchard, experiences I would always remember.
    Lucky you
    ..

    ReplyDelete
  4. LisaOctober 29, 2021 at 12:39 AM

    I'm bookmarking the links to learn more about the fold form. I am a failure at growing zinnias. Mine are never the bright colors I see others have. Mine always end up so faded looking. Then, I had one looking nice and the frost came.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 2:02 AM

    Aww😕
    Thanks for your appreciation Lisa

    Much💜love

    ReplyDelete
  6. IngridOctober 29, 2021 at 2:45 AM

    The perfect form for an unfurling flower :-)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 4:34 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Ingrid

      Much💜love

      Delete
  7. Rosemary Nissen-WadeOctober 29, 2021 at 3:36 AM

    Oh, how lovely! I don't believe I've seen zinnias in the flesh; nice to encounter them virtually instead, thanks to you.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 4:34 AM

    Glad you dropped by Rosemary

    Much💜love

    ReplyDelete
  9. DoraOctober 29, 2021 at 12:07 PM

    Zinnias are excatly as you describe: little bursts!
    pax,
    dora

    ReplyDelete
  10. HelenOctober 29, 2021 at 12:49 PM

    I had forgotten the "fold" poetry form ... you make it seem simple ... I know it is not! Cheers. Happy weekend ....

    ReplyDelete
  11. Merril D. SmithOctober 29, 2021 at 12:49 PM

    You create such a lovely image of the brightly colored flowers--with a hint of nostalgia. This is an interesting form you created, too, Gillena.

    ReplyDelete
  12. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 1:54 PM

    Humble bow.
    Thanks for your appreciation Merril

    Much💜love

    ReplyDelete
  13. Callsign SantaOctober 29, 2021 at 2:13 PM

    One can feel your delight in the colours...and feelings

    ReplyDelete
  14. Glenn ButtkusOctober 29, 2021 at 3:10 PM

    A happy message from a happy mind. The "folded" form uses a refrain. I didn't check the rhyme scheme or syllable count. It is similar to several we have done in the past.

    ReplyDelete
  15. weavermiamiOctober 29, 2021 at 5:22 PM

    There is just something about a big, bright zinnia that speak of happiness -- thanks for the imagery.
    ~peace, Jason

    ReplyDelete
  16. KerfeOctober 29, 2021 at 5:25 PM

    Your colorful words brightened my day.

    ReplyDelete
  17. Sunra RainzOctober 29, 2021 at 7:03 PM

    A lovely poem and an interesting form, Gillena! 💕

    ReplyDelete
  18. Gillena CoxOctober 30, 2021 at 3:41 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Sunra

    Much💜love

    ReplyDelete
  19. Petru J ViljoenOctober 30, 2021 at 8:14 AM

    A delight! Thank you.

    ReplyDelete
  20. Gillena CoxOctober 30, 2021 at 11:55 AM

    Happy you dropped by Petru
    Much💜love

    ReplyDelete
  21. RommyOctober 31, 2021 at 7:12 AM

    Such lovely blooms!

    ReplyDelete
  22. Gillena CoxOctober 31, 2021 at 12:14 PM

    Happy you dropped by Rommy

    Much💜love

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)