Tuesday, October 7, 2025

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in Cocorite and WestMoorings. Trinidad

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MAKING MYTHS [8] LET GO
Anxious. For night, 
Angry is its might
October demons capture Wind
Twisting her so
She pull away
And in so doing
Oops! roofs are ripped away

Let go you demons
Let go of Wind
That she may finds butterflies
To scallop and sway

Oh but jealous of
Tonight's supermoon
The October demons
Make faces at the sun
Torturing Wind to daytime havock
© gillena cox 2025




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20 comments:

  1. DoraOctober 7, 2025 at 4:20 PM

    Gillena, I love that second stanza especially, rhetorically that direct address works so well, rebuking the "demons that capture the wind." I also liked your unique use of "scallop," and the bewitching quality of the normally gentle wind with butterflies. It must be the nerve-wracking hurricane season. I hope you and yours weather it alright. 🙏🏽💖

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  2. Merril D. SmithOctober 7, 2025 at 4:30 PM

    That demon wind! I hope you stay safe, Gillena! 💙

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  3. Gillena CoxOctober 7, 2025 at 4:49 PM

    Thanks Merrill

    Much♡love

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  4. ms_liliOctober 8, 2025 at 12:05 AM

    When the elements and planets feud we suffer. I'd much rather the wind scallop butterflies (such a beautiful idea.)

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  5. Gillena CoxOctober 8, 2025 at 12:25 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Lisa

    Much♡love

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  6. Kim M. RussellOctober 8, 2025 at 3:44 AM

    Hurricane season must indeed be an anxious time, |Gillen, and I hope you stay safe. I love the thought of October demons capturing the wind, and the way you address them in the second stanza.

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  7. Laura BloomsburyOctober 8, 2025 at 6:36 AM

    where the hurricanes blow - that second verse is a brilliant rendition

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  8. Jae RoseOctober 8, 2025 at 7:00 AM

    You remind us of the forces of nature so well - Jae

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  9. brudbergOctober 8, 2025 at 9:11 AM

    Nature can be vicious too, and especially in autumn

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  10. Dwight L. RothOctober 8, 2025 at 9:51 AM

    A great poem, Gillena. I love the contrasts.

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  11. lynn__October 8, 2025 at 9:29 PM

    I hope gentler winds blow your direction, Gillena!

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  12. Frewin55October 10, 2025 at 3:34 AM

    I love the way you personify the wind, demons and moon, Gillena - praying you stay safe...

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  13. Gillena CoxOctober 10, 2025 at 6:24 AM

    Thanks Frewin

    Much♡love

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