Monday, October 28, 2024

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A promise of better days
Even when caught in puzzling maze

The promise of sunlight
Even when the storm might

Blown your roof off
Yes promise not to scoff

For daylight's promise follows
Dark night shadows 

Promise moon to smile back
And smile back
© gillena cox 2024


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Challenge: to write a quadrille, the prompt word is  promise

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18 comments:

  1. Kim Whysall-Hammond aka The Cheesesellers WifeOctober 28, 2024 at 6:40 PM

    HivGillena - what a lovely poem. I always smile when I see the Moon

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  2. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2024 at 6:56 PM

    Happy you dropped by Kim

    Much♡love

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  3. GraceOctober 28, 2024 at 8:10 PM

    Love the positive mindset even after the storm hits you. Keep smiling.

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  4. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2024 at 8:39 PM

    Happy you dropped by Grace

    Much♡love

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  5. Ken / rivrvlogrOctober 29, 2024 at 7:20 AM

    The promise of a smile is always nice.

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  6. kittysversesOctober 29, 2024 at 7:34 AM

    Yes, smile back, nice one. :)

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  7. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2024 at 8:14 AM

    Happy you dropped by Kitty

    Much♡love

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  8. brudbergOctober 29, 2024 at 11:28 AM

    Alas... right now, the night seems to win

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  9. Dwight L. RothOctober 29, 2024 at 12:25 PM

    Beautifully written. I love your closing line!

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  10. HelenOctober 29, 2024 at 12:26 PM

    Love the rhyme in your quadrille, the rhythm of it!!! I imagine you, Gillena, with a permanent smile on your pretty face.

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  11. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comOctober 29, 2024 at 1:40 PM

    LOVE those positive promises, Gillena! Made me smile :)

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  12. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2024 at 3:06 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Lillian

    Much♡love

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  13. David BogomolnyOctober 30, 2024 at 10:29 AM

    Gillena, your poem beautifully captures the resilience of hope, reminding us that even in darkness, brighter days are always on the horizon!

    Much love,
    David
    http://skepticskaddish.com/

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  14. ms_liliOctober 30, 2024 at 11:13 PM

    promise permeates your poem with hope, Gillena. All good stuff. I like the line that you must also give if you want to remain hopeful.

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