A touch of sunshine
A dash of azure
This poem wanders into
A bright day
Eyes are viewing
The same scenes as yesterday
Only one bird led the chorus
At daybreak shrill and right
What of sunset
Will there be a touch of gold
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I like this, Gillena. From your start and another few choice word picks, what do you think ai would come up with? I don't do ai poems but otherwise, I think this would approach her job of writing it. I am not sure if one can pose a word, or syllable, count on it.
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Happy you dropped by Jim. There is a word count for the quadrille. 44 words.
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That will be a beautiful golden sunset. Love the bright colors of the sun.
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Gillena, I love this vivid imagery and reflective tone!
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A joyous quadrille, Gillena, full of light and birdsong, that starts with morning and ends with sunset – as is only right and proper.
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The twilight hours are the best (at least in summer)
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How lovely, Gillena! Love it. ❤️
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Punam
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Your Quadrille is lovely, sweet .. from the adorable image to last word.
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"This poem wanders into
ReplyDeleteA bright day" I love that, Gillena! 💙
Thanks for your appreciation Merril
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A beautiful use of the prompt, Gillena.
ReplyDeleteI so love the hope of this Gillena
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