Tuesday, February 13, 2024

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 Words On A Wall At A Ruins

Once; when the world danced

In riots joy

A feathered headdress lurked

Waiting to hurl a signal

The way a drum throbs

Life into meaningful dreams

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18 comments:

  1. DoraFebruary 13, 2024 at 5:19 PM

    Enigmatic words, and full of promise, leaves us yearning for those "meaningful dreams," those "riots of joy."

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  2. GraceFebruary 13, 2024 at 6:17 PM

    Once upon a time, it was filled with drums and riots of joy.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 14, 2024 at 2:27 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Grace

      Much♡love

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  3. DiFebruary 13, 2024 at 9:05 PM

    I do hope those days return, meaningful dream, riots of joy and drums. Yes!!

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  4. Dwight L. RothFebruary 13, 2024 at 10:25 PM

    I love your poem that alludes to carnival and the images and dreams it conjures up.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 14, 2024 at 2:28 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Dwight

      Much♡love

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  5. lynn__February 13, 2024 at 11:40 PM

    I can imagine the feathered headdress lurking and feel the drums throb with life!

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  6. Gillena CoxFebruary 14, 2024 at 2:28 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Lynn

    Much♡love

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  7. Kim M. RussellFebruary 14, 2024 at 3:58 AM

    I love that feathered headdress lurking and waiting for a signal, Gillena, and I could hear the throbbing drum. That’s what I need at the moment, meaningful dreams.

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  8. paeansunpluggedFebruary 14, 2024 at 6:31 AM

    May those meaningful dreams come true!

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 15, 2024 at 12:47 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Punam

      Much♡love

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  9. brudbergFebruary 14, 2024 at 6:31 AM

    love the thought of the dreams that once sprung from those ancient stones of the ruin

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 15, 2024 at 12:48 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Björn

      Much♡love

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  10. Ken / rivrvlogrFebruary 14, 2024 at 7:30 AM

    Recognizing those dreams is the key.

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  11. Gillena CoxFebruary 15, 2024 at 12:48 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Ken

    Much♡love

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