She wanted so badly to go mall shopping with her friends, but there was this inherent 'lack of fun' app installed in her mum, so there was no way she could go if her dad was not around to plead on her behalf.
This was an important event. She had to buy a gift for her boy in Standard Five. He was only two years older than she was and he was such a hunk. All the girls swooned around him, but she had caught his eye.
She had to think of something and fast. Words swarmed like a buzz of bees in her mind. To be pretty for you I have dropped two seeds of turnsole in the dark of both eyes.
She started scribbling and pretty soon there was a poem almost by enchantment on the page. After she read the poem her mum smiled and nodded.
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Barque of Frailty by Rishi Dastidar,
Barque of frailty, full of reformed rakes and bookish hearts
Block of fealty, full of knees doffing and hats bending
Barker of fantasy, full of bodies’ memories and memory’s body
Baroque of felony, full of fire curves and wavering sin
Byzantine of fertility, full of ground awakenings and blue sighs
Burst of fragility, full of hairline universes and breaking beats
Bloom of futility, full of pause buttons and waiting rooms
Brioche of flexibility, full of lifted crusts and spongy beds
Bridle of fashionability, full of revolving time and entropy’s glitter
Bulb of formidability, full of electric light never off since 1901
Blush of facility, full of a click’s ease and railway charm
Burial of fallibility, full of resurrected promises and wave logic
Brick of feasibility, full of home lies and silent explosions
This is absolutely delightful! I can picture her penning down a poem for him. Thank you so much for adding your voice to the prompt, Gillena ❤️❤️
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Oh, this is so sweet, Gillena. I love that she wrote him a poem. ❤️❤️
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There is a magical aspect, almost as if the poem persuaded mom to give assent. The "mystical" ingredient does encourage unusual aspects. Loved it!
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I love your real down to earth poem, Gillena. Such a great story and the prompt works so well.
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Nice story, Gillena. My pick of the words are "but she had caught his eye". Almost gives me goosebumps. :)
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I like how you turned around the situation with her mum, Gillena, from the “'lack of fun' app” to smiling and nodding, and that her gift for her boy was a poem.
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Oh the amount of control our phones allows us, but maybe it is better to present her wishes in the open.
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This is just lovely, Gillena.
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This was a fun response to the prompt, Gillena.
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You created a poet within a poem and let the words of the prompt flow from her pen! So many ingenious solutions to this tricky prompt Gillena - Love too...
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