Where clouds sit upon
Looking down at us lowly creatures
In our houses
Hiding away from pandemic viruses
Once upon a time
We flooded the beach sands with our footsteps
Running
Laughing
Playing
Like children just discovering what joy is
And today
The silence wraps us in warm hugs
The kind we want to shrug off
But we know
They are the best we should have NOW.
NOW © gillena cox 2021
PROCESS NOTE
This was a hard challenge for me. I voiced my poem on my phone but could not upload it. Then i tried voicing again directly to the post but it was not accepted so i had to go to my laptop and tried to up load the voiced recording to sound cloud only to be more confused and frustrated. I could only get it uploaded if i included it making it into a video. Only then it could be accepted to the post
Hope you enjoy this attempt
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31 August 2021
31 August 2017
31 August 2015
I think you did great Gillena. I liked they way your poem tells of the present, but could be told a hundred years from now as well! Well done.
ReplyDeleteDon't worry about the video. Mine won't let me load a voice unless I upgrade! :<(
Thank you for your appreciation Dwight
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Sorry for the trouble you had with the recording Gillena, but I really love your video! All those echoes of past times having fun with others made me sigh. Things are getting back to normal here, I hope they will for you soon too ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Ingrid
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A poignant poem, Gillena--especially the last stanza. I liked the video. Thank you for your persistence! I hope things will be better for you there soon(and here, too).
ReplyDeleteHappy 59th Anniversary of Independence!
Thanks Merril
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Your poem depicts so well the change in our lives thrust upon us by this accursed virus. Good write!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Bev
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I love your recording, your poem, your lilting accent ...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Helen
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Congratulations on persisting with the video! The virus is going to be with is a while longer, I think.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Jane
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What a stellar performance. I enjoyed hearing you and your lovely oral poetry with beautiful turn-of-phrases.
ReplyDeleteSo many changes... and some things are actually for the better I think.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation K
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Such a lovely voice for poetry! Your description of the silence wrapping us in warm hugs is profound. I think we will all come out of this pandemic different on the other side. More introspective and hopefully thankful for when things are more normal.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Tricia
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Thanks for your appreciation Bjorn
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well done, gillena, i really enjoyed listening to that
ReplyDelete"We flooded the beach sands with our footsteps
Running
Laughing
Playing
Like children just discovering what joy is"
really liked the rhythm here, nice moving flow, well done!
Thanks for your appreciation Phillip
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Gillena,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful representation of our times, our loss in this time of covid! I absolutely loved "Once upon a time/We flooded the beach sands with our footsteps" and the rush of memories that unleashes. A beautiful write.
pax,
dora
Thanks for your appreciation Dora
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Loved your reading, Gillena! Such a lovely flow to your words of the present reality.
ReplyDeleteHappy Independence Day!
Thanks Punam
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