COMET
When a comet, swishes her tail like mermaid wishes,
Know that brilliant story of majesty is told.
The one in need of sharing,
Throughout the whole Universe.
To all of life,
Not just for me, not just for you,
But for lamb and lion, fish, bird and leaf
COMET © gillena cox 2018
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17 April 2017
17 April 2016
...then one star
The Tuesday Platform ~ April Style
Kerry Oconnor is prompting. Challenge: Open mic with an OPTIONAL extra... the work of 20th Century artist, Wassily Kandinsky... to select an image and WRITE
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That's a lovely take on that image!
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A wonderful and magical piece - you really took us into the painting
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I love the swishy sounds in the opening line, Gillena, and the comparison of comet and mermaid.
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This is beautiful, Gillena!💞 I love the idea of a comet swishing her tail like mermaid wishes.. sigh..
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely start for my day. I, too, like the comet’s swishing tail,and the thought that “her” gift is for everyone. :-)
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Beautiful imagery Gillena x
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I love this!!
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I like the way you envisage the universe as a whole. Everything is a part of a bigger picture.
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This flashes me back to the last comet we could see with the naked eye during the nineties. Magical.
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Opening and closing lines are magical.
ReplyDeleteI love the comparison between the comet and the mermaid. I also like that her gift is for all of us.
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Very nice, Gillena. It reminds me of one of my favorite scripture verses, Romans 8:19 "For the creation waits in eager expectation for the children of God to be revealed." That and the verses surrounding I believe are why dogs and cars, a part of God's creation, will be in Heaven when they die.
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(✿◠‿◠) Thank you for your appreciation Jim
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I love the way you view this painting!
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