i sweep
yellow leaves fall
from the Plumeria
as if greeting Fall far away
hello
© gillena cox 2017
# Here in Trinidad and Tobago we have only The Wet and The Dry Seasons; no Summer Winter Fall or Spring.
November Themes
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26 November 2016
This is terrific.. the hello on the last line works so well. And I totally connect..we don't have distinct seasons either- wet, hot and pleasant does it
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have presented your poem. The yellow catches the eye.
DeleteHappy you dropped by to read mine Rajani
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The art work enhances your words. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Cressida
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But you have plumeria!! Gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Marian
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I think I need the seasons actually... but it sounds lovely to have warmth.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Björn
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Beautiful! I like the idea ofor greeting fall far away. 😊
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Vivian
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Pleasant thoughts. And Gillena, I guess your imagination can have falling yellow and red leaves. Ours generally turn in late November, not all but some trees. This year it looks like maybe in December it will happen. We live north of the Gulf Coast, about 60 miles inland. Most often it doesn't snow, again we all think snow comes about once every ten years.
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Happy you dropped in Jim
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Love their greetings. So beautifully put Gillena.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous write, Gillena!❤️
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in Sanaa
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